INTEMPERANCE X - Chapter 2, Making Waves
Added 2025-07-07 05:09:21 +0000 UTCHere is the second chapter in the latest final book of the series. I have tried my best to treat the Indian Ocean Earthquake and Tsunami with all the respect due for such a terrible event. At the same time, the event did not touch the characters in any meaningful way so to assign false emotion to them is not how I roll. Let me know if I treated the subject with the gravity due. And, on with the story.
Comments
Agreed - for some reason this made me mad. I would like to see some sort of comeuppence, but in the world of tabloids probably not.
HamBarca22
2025-07-10 21:58:19 +0000 UTCGreat Chapter.. But I noticed there was a "Have" missing when the Captain was telling them he'll (insert here) them back to shore in time for dinner.
Dennis Robertson
2025-07-08 12:43:56 +0000 UTCReading the last two chapters, I can truly say I have deep seated disdain for Valerie, Paul and Drew. Rarely when reading fiction can an author accomplish that feat; you have written them to villainous perfection. Congratulations. Looking forward to how Jake goes scorched earth on them. My hope is it makes Mindy Snow’s downfall seem tame.
SteveZ
2025-07-07 23:09:39 +0000 UTC
