COGNATE AIR - Chapter 1
Added 2025-05-27 08:46:33 +0000 UTCNo charge for this as it is not an Intemp chapter. This is another story I started and did not continue with. It is a sequel to my stories A Correct Destiny and A Lesson Regarding Humanity. I am writing it as a standalone novel (if I continue it) that can be read and enjoyed by those who have not read the original books. This is a universe that is distinct from all of my other universes. Let me know if you like this one.
Comments
I do love this novel, I hope you continue with it soon!
Russ Wideman
2025-06-20 21:03:21 +0000 UTCFinally caught up rereading these. I can see s9me really interesting potential in this, hope you pick it up.
Rich Collins
2025-06-14 19:33:31 +0000 UTCStill love this chapter, just read it for the third time, hoping for more!! One question. I know nothing about cargo operations at airports. But is it realistic that Ken could just walk off the grounds at a major international airport? How would he get back -- surely there'd have to be some sort of security checkpoint, yeah? At most major American airports, at least on the passenger airport side, you can't really walk into / out of the airport grounds. I know cargo terminals operate differently, but still -- wouldn't the sheer size of EWR maybe make this unrealistic?
Eric
2025-06-01 23:59:35 +0000 UTCI've hoped you would revisit this universe.
Carl Clements
2025-05-30 05:09:22 +0000 UTCAs much as I would like a new theme/story, revisiting the cognate or greenies universe trumps that big time, well written charapter for a stand-alone and although the cognate real nature is revealed in the chapter, it does not feel rushed; now I’m hungry for more. Looking forward now to the next taster chapter. Great work Al.
Jose Santos
2025-05-27 20:11:40 +0000 UTCThe first Cognate story was composed of quite a bit of background into Cognate life, society, physiology, history, rules, etc. I wondered how you would do a stand alone here, ( and was worried about many chapters rereading something I already knew about) but it seems like you've got most of the canonical info down in the first chapter. Well played.
wayne seitz
2025-05-27 17:06:37 +0000 UTC
