INTEMPERANCE IX - Chapter 18, Going Off the Rails
Added 2025-05-25 10:51:12 +0000 UTCOnce again, I let words pour out of me and spent all day writing the next chapter. The Judge Olson situation intensifies and the Kingsley's have to deal with an invasion of Nerdlys into their already chaotic home. Let me know how you like it.
Comments
You write "crazy" well... (as well as "stoned"... that made me laugh!) This story Arc has really taken off!
Russ Wideman
2025-05-26 16:07:51 +0000 UTCOwen's mom will have her part to play soon. Things have been moving too fast for me to mention her, but she's there and about to step up. I think it likely that she would have no one to pick her up in Los Angeles and might be "trapped" in that dreadful city for a bit because she doesn't know how to get herself home.
Al Steiner
2025-05-25 21:30:19 +0000 UTCLoving this story line, thought the holy bongwater couldnt be topped then you proved me wrong. Did have a question though, this has been going on for a few days now at least with multiple news articles and the like. I know Owen’s mom went to Denver for a church thing but wouldnt she have called Owen or come back after hearing about her husband going nuts and videos being posted? Even if social media wasnt as large as it is now, you think she would have talked to someone in the church or a friend who let her know this was blowing up.
Richem
2025-05-25 19:38:57 +0000 UTC
