INTEMPERANCE VII - Chapter 22, Aunt Flo
Added 2023-11-27 03:24:16 +0000 UTCAnother transitional chapter that is bringing us toward the end of this volume. Once again, I've underestimated how much story I would tell in this volume of the series. I am nearing the end of the average book wordcount but nowhere near where I envision the story ultimately heading. It now seems likely there will be a Book 8 in the near future. I hope nobody thinks I'm just dragging this out because I am not. There is just so much to tell in this saga. As always, let me know how I'm doing and how I'm getting there. Your input continues to guide the story in so many ways.
Comments
Correction: “ This would break a record formally held by Paul McCartney…”. The correct word usage here is “formerly,” though since the record isn’t yet broken I think you can omit the word altogether. As in “…break a record held by Paul McCartney…”
2024-01-03 03:16:58 +0000 UTCI write at the pace I write. This is the holiday season and other commitments come up in real life. I will post the next chapter when it is complete.
Al Steiner
2023-12-23 11:59:02 +0000 UTCJust my (I believed ) humorous nudge to move beyond "Aunt Flo"
Roger
2023-12-22 17:21:58 +0000 UTCI'm not entirely sure what you are talking about.
Al Steiner
2023-12-22 12:00:02 +0000 UTCI see my last attempts to comment have not made the big screen. It is the Winter Solstice, the true end to the year. Queries abound. Is See-ya with child? Has Matt OD'd? Has Brainwash been rinsed? Has SLO been relocated by San Andreas to the Artic? Questions, questions without answers.
Roger
2023-12-21 17:48:11 +0000 UTC
