INTEMPERANCE VI - Chapter 11, From the Depths of History
Added 2022-05-17 01:35:02 +0000 UTCThis was an enjoyable chapter to write. Lots of Caydee in this one and it moves the overall story along quite nicely in my opinion. Let me know how I'm doing. And thank you to the kind Patron who made a particular suggestion earlier. I did manage to incorporate it. Hope I did it justice. If not.... well... that's the way it goes.
Comments
Loved the ear pull scene; it brought back memories ...and a reflexively sore ear. Nice to see a dig into the vault, but I'm betting that a potential career may have just derailed itself.
Adam Driscoll
2022-05-27 07:09:15 +0000 UTCThanks for suggesting the ear pull scene. And I will fix the loathe.
Al Steiner
2022-05-20 18:02:16 +0000 UTC
