INTEMPERANCE VI, Chapter 7, Life Goes On
Added 2022-03-10 08:01:33 +0000 UTCPlease make note of the note I put at the beginning of the chapter. The first, brief scene belongs at the end of Chapter 6 and will be moved there in the final edit. Chapter 7 will officially begin at the second scene. Nothing else will change, just where they are placed. Thank you for your patience and please let me know how I did on this one. Those of you that asked for more of the other children get a good helping of Kelvin (as well as Caydee) in this chapter.
Comments
It is a nasty heart rhythm.
Al Steiner
2022-03-19 20:27:37 +0000 UTCI knew that I had come across V-Tach in your writings somewhere before and lo-and-behold I am just re-reading DIAO again and come to Chapter 12 and there it is!
David Stewart
2022-03-19 18:33:15 +0000 UTCExcellent chapter. Nice to see some character development with Kim, and some evidence that her relationship with Matt is more than just one of carnal convenience (at least, in HER opinion).
Robert James
2022-03-15 04:51:47 +0000 UTC
