INTEMPERANCE VI - Chapter 3, Something is Wrong
Added 2022-01-09 02:53:51 +0000 UTCAnd here is Chapter 3. Not the happiest chapter I've ever written in this saga, but a necessary one. Let me know what you think, as always.
Comments
I guess the way the information gets out is a highlight in my mind about how what is technically not a privacy violation can quickly reach across the border to a gossip spreader like a spouse who is not in the medical field, or a lower level employee who is not trained in privacy protection.
Al Steiner
2022-01-19 21:36:42 +0000 UTCThat was another roller coaster, and I'm imagining the shit-storm that's going to blow up over the privacy violations. Heads gonna roll - but responders & hospital folk really are horrible gossips at times. The newspaper bit is, I'm willing to bet, going to have Jake furious. Looking forward to the next installment!
Adam Driscoll
2022-01-17 01:14:28 +0000 UTCWill fix the error, thanks. They say you're supposed to write what you know, and I know medicine and healthcare pretty well so those scenes are easy for me. Glad I could impress a physician.
Al Steiner
2022-01-10 00:03:19 +0000 UTCAs a physician, I have to say that your EMT and nursing training serve your writing well. You do medical writing better than anyone I have ever read. Very realistic and no errors that I can see! I did find a typo in paragraph 60, which starts out "In the trek ..." The word "poors" should be "pours.'' Loving this story. Thank you for not killing off Celia!
Drew Seibert
2022-01-09 22:37:37 +0000 UTC
