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INTEMPERANCE V - Chapter 18, I Would Swallow My Pride

Thanks to the continued oppressive heat and wildfire smoke in the Sacramento Valley (but there is no such thing as global warming), I was able to quickly resolve the cliffhanger from the last chapter during my days-off period. It's back to work for 3 days tomorrow, but for now, please enjoy the showdown. I believe I have stayed completely within everyone's character during this chapter and that decisions that have been made go along with that. Let me know if you agree or disagree if you please. While I won't write any further during my work week, I do read all my messages each day as part of my routine and would like to know how I did here.

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Oh yeah... The only thing I don't like about the new chapters, is having to wait for them... Oh Well.. Such is life.

Dennis Robertson

I see. Well that makes more sense then. Hopefully you did enjoy chapter 19 then.

Al Steiner

My reply was to Robert James post Al.. I was referring to Jake going on Tour with Matt.

Dennis Robertson


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