INTEMPERANCE V - Chapter 17, The Best Vacation
Added 2021-09-04 04:26:43 +0000 UTCThings are starting to move along more quickly now, or are they? As always, let me know how I'm doing. Your feedback shapes the story to a strong degree.
Comments
Well, shit. That's one hell of a cliffhanger! Al, this story just keeps getting better. You've managed to give us another great chapter ...and another 'gift' from Al "Cliffhanger' Steiner! Lol, thanks for the fantastic reads!
Adam Driscoll
2021-09-09 02:36:51 +0000 UTCI already have too many characters to keep track of. The receptionist will remain a background presence for now. I can't even remember what name I gave her.
Al Steiner
2021-09-07 16:34:39 +0000 UTCI love it! I was hoping that the receptionist wouldn't have been on vacation, though. It would've been funny to see how she dealt with Matt. Hey, we don't even know what sort of receptionist KVA hired, do we? I was thinking of how Matt would deal with some tough older woman who could put him in his place... Sorry, just daydreaming here. Excellent chapter!
wulf losee
2021-09-07 16:25:06 +0000 UTC
