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INTEMPERANCE V - Chapter 14, Urban Legend

A bizarre tale is told about Jake and Laura and they are astounded to find that there are many who actually believe it. But they do have some ammunition of their own in this battle.  As always, let me know how I'm doing. This was an enjoyable chapter to write and I hope everyone likes it as much as I did.

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That was a great look at what a load of crap most urban legends are. A really good chapter overall, an a reminder to not take things at face value.

Adam Driscoll

That is how I make my burgers at home and it is incredible. And, yes, I was referencing the way that urban legends are started and proliferated. I remember being told in 9th grade or so about how Rod Stewart had become sick during a concert and they had pumped a quart or so of semen from his stomach (which they tested, in this scenario and determined was both semen and human) and for years I was absolutely sure that Rod Stewart was gay. That influenced this chapter heavily with the kicker of the internet age booming.

Al Steiner

Well, that was depressing. And worrisome, given your intimation that the cops little exploratory visit doesn't entirely settle things. But hey, we got a good description of the whole garlic butter burger thing, which I've yet to actually try. Maybe I'll give it a whirl now that I'm at my family casa, which actually has a grill, unlike mine. Thanks for writing!

Tim Keenan


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