INTEMPERANCE V, Chapter 2: Tonight's the Night
Added 2021-03-10 05:30:28 +0000 UTCDon't want to say much about this one for fear of spoilers. But please let me know what you think about it.
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No, that probably will not happen, but anything is possible when you are just making everything up as you go along.
Al Steiner
2021-03-13 21:27:14 +0000 UTCMatt will be making an appearance in the next chapter.
Al Steiner
2021-03-13 21:26:32 +0000 UTCWe haven't heard much about Matt and his taxes. I wonder where you thought of going with that angle :-)
2021-03-12 21:47:39 +0000 UTCGreat chapter. I like how you made Celia and Susie's relationship deeper than just sex, really stays in line with the awesome character that you've developed. I know it probably won't happen, but I'd love to see Celia in a long term relationship with Laura and Jake.
Shane Moore
2021-03-12 21:18:19 +0000 UTC
