INTEMPERANCE IV, Never Say Never, Chapter 13, Novel Solutions
Added 2020-06-21 02:20:38 +0000 UTCSorry I've been taking so long between chapters, everyone. A lot going on in life these days. Mrs. Steiner and I went on vacation - not the vacation we planned when I applied for it, thank you COVID -- but we managed to get away to Las Vegas in the COVID world, which is an interesting story in and of itself. Anyway, 13 is done and I'm back in the groove. I'm going to try like hell to get 14 out before the end of the month.
Comments
Celia has never been pregnant, and I'm not sure how you could have construed that Mindy was pregnant from Jake at any point.
Al Steiner
2020-07-10 18:47:59 +0000 UTClooks like my guess was wrong at this point. i thought mindy snow got pregnant by Jake, back when she was blackmailing her director husbond, and used Greg to get back into jakes life now that he is a star again.. maybe double preg with celia in the beginning
Mads Nielsen
2020-07-09 17:38:53 +0000 UTCI would never forget about Matt. He's one of my favorite characters.
Al Steiner
2020-06-26 18:43:19 +0000 UTCGood chapter, in terms of narrative thrust. Important to see Matt (and his ongoing health problems, and implied tax/financial problems) again after three chapters away. Wonderful to have some uncertainty implied, but not overtly stated, for a possible Greg/Mindy/Celia triangle.
Duke OfOmnium
2020-06-24 03:43:28 +0000 UTC
