INTEMPERANCE IV, Never Say Never - Chapter 12, It's Only Make Believe
Added 2020-05-21 04:50:49 +0000 UTCTo all my loyal patrons: Sorry it took so long to get this chapter out to you. A little perfect storm of circumstances slowed me down for this round. First of all, this is a pivotal chapter in the tale and I wanted to make sure I got it right and made it as believable as possible. There was a bit of writer's block involved here, but I pushed through and hopefully pulled off what I was trying to accomplish. Let me know how I did. In addition to that, I was dealing with a few real life issues that took up a considerable amount of time this month. Nothing really bad or life-changing (in fact, some of these things were kind of happy things, just time consuming), but anyway, here's chapter 12. Feedback always appreciated. Remember, you're my beta testers. If I'm off course here, let me know.
Comments
Hard to explain. I just don't like her personality, or her behavior. You write her character well, which allows me to dislike her.
Ziddari
2021-08-24 07:57:05 +0000 UTCHow come? Please explain.
Al Steiner
2021-08-24 06:33:36 +0000 UTCBeginning to hate Teach.
Ziddari
2021-08-24 06:10:53 +0000 UTCHi
Al Steiner
2020-06-18 05:51:38 +0000 UTC
