INTEMPERANCE III - Different Circles. Chapter 20-- Providence (the one in Rhode Island)
Added 2019-10-10 03:18:47 +0000 UTCComments
Thanks. It's one of those near-homophones that's like fingernails on a blackboard to me. That said, if it's in dialogue, you can always blame it on Jake :-)
Duke OfOmnium
2020-01-10 04:09:41 +0000 UTCIt's been fixed in the Kindle version, as will be pretty much any other minor errors you might find in Book 3 on Patreon.
Al Steiner
2020-01-10 03:57:31 +0000 UTC"commiserate with what I was being paid for selling appliances." should be "commensurate". Although since it's in dialogue, you can let it ride.
Duke OfOmnium
2020-01-10 03:38:56 +0000 UTCGot it. Thanks. I hope you are otherwise enjoying the story, and please do not feel the need to point out every minor error you find.
Al Steiner
2020-01-05 21:48:01 +0000 UTC
