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INTEMPERANCE III - Chapter 5, Tight Quarters


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fixed. Thanks

Al Steiner

I am glad you're enjoying the story. I will re-edit the entire novel again prior to publication and probably catch most of these, hopefully. While I appreciate your efforts, it is not necessary to point out every minor error that you find.

Al Steiner

upon her: She noted his gaze upon him and blushed, quickly dropping her robe Don't know how else to point out errors, hope you delete them when you're done. Bob

I'm sure Mary can play piano, isn't Cindy the piano player?: They did. Mary started them out, playing out the melody at eighty beats per minute on the piano.


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