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Janet Devlin
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Uber Nightmare!

Whoops!! Bit of a technical glitch tonight 🙈 here’s my latest poem, all about an Uber nightmare.....

Uber Nightmare!

Comments

Some absolute fool had the audacity to dump you?! I find that unfathomable!!!

Tucker

I really like the juxtaposition of the countdown to the Uber with the end of the relationship. Your words really captured the sadness of a breakup with the awkwardness of leaving and not able to leave.

Jason Wallwork

Sad, beautiful, emotional.... Love the double meaning in the title as well... Uber Brilliant

Mark Loosemore

I figured out I was just a side piece to this girl I really liked, while we were out on the town.... then i drove her home.... it was a forty minute drive.... hands down my most awkward drive ever. lol

AlphaSword456

The heartaches of life always tell the lie that there will be no more joy.

Central Florida Homestead

I'm sure it has happened to someone. 😳

Paddy McGlynn

I didn't realize you'd taken up writing horror, Janet 😆

sableram1

Are you a singer/songwriter who writes poems or a poet that writes and sings songs? Either way, they capture your personality. And, don't worry. life will always throw surprises, good or bad, and that is what makes us the way we are. May it never change

Rob Wilkinson

Just imagine being the poor Uber driver.

Mark Doherty

We are still grappling with how art that is so sad and gut-wrenching can also be so beautiful. One of life’s mysteries. Thoroughly enjoyed this poem Janet, thank you for sharing. 🙂🌹

JennyandSteve


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