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[Comics] From Boss to Baby- Page 5 (Alts)

Two alternative again for page 5. The meeting doesn't go as planned...

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K

Thanks a lot for all these corrections, Whill, I fixed the files!

Hey this is super cute but there are a couple typos. On the first page, the last sentence should either read "we weren't expecting you so soon" or "we didn't expect you so soon." Also is "Business meal" intentional? Business meeting sounds more appropriate but if they're discussing business over food, something like 'business luncheon' might be better. As for the other page, it should be 'expenses', not 'expanses'.

Whill

She's quite the cutie pie xD


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