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[WIP] Parental Rehearsal [Page 38]

And another wip, hope you'll like it!

[WIP] Parental Rehearsal [Page 38]

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Now THEY might like this outcome and have their little bunny back.

Not the best turn of events for him!

Thanks a lot to you two for the corrections!

I wonder what Judy's parents think of this

Yeah that's fair 😔

CreamyCookie Princess

Ngl, feel kind of bad for Nick. Judy is cute and all but Nick is breaking his back and dignity for her. He’s indulging her interests but he’s sounding miserable. Like he lost his partner and got a big baby instead. Caregivers need love and affection to.

Judy is so kawaii here 😚🐇😚🐇

CreamyCookie Princess

More and more Judy is becoming an ABDL! 😊

I would say "And she often wanted to continue this weird roleplay. ..." Fits better.

Ricardo de Cervantes

Besides the other correction I'd throw "she'd often want to continue these weird roleplays" and maybe "rearrange" works better than arrange

Thanks a lot Blake!

Haha, a real superstar

This turn of events is the best thing that could happen to Judy to continue her life as an adult baby.

If you interested in a grammar correction it should be "She didn't even leave one shooting opportunity pending" if that helps

Blake Wall


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