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[WIP] Mulan

Wip featuring a modern Mulan from Wreck it Ralph 2, hope you'll like it!

[WIP] Mulan

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Thanks!

Happy you like it Magic!

This is going to be amazing! Really love stuff where people are aware of the state of their diaper but at the same time not shocked it used, like it’s a normal thing for them. Can’t wait to see what it looks like when done!

Krakenfox

I can tell this is going to be really good. Super looking forward to it thanks Soap!

I like the idea of a diaper being super full but no one noticing. Everyone else has you covered on the dialogue.

Thanks Rich!

Thanks a lot for all the corrections!

Typo on others, damn. Alright y’all, let me have it

Mashugana

While other's can be correct sometimes, others is actually the correct spelling here. The 's is possessive in this case. E.g. "We can do each other's jobs"

Just4n0th3rUs3r

(there’s no apostrophe in others)

FreehandBarricade

others not other's

Ometeotl

Absolutely loving it Soap! A few things of note; the first bubble would have its readability improved with an exclamation mark between “ugh” and “that’s”, and the second bubble reads better as “How did the others not notice?” Can’t wait to see how it turns out!

FreehandBarricade

Grammar nazi here, “How did the others didn’t notice” should be “How did the other’s not notice?” Great pic BTW

Mashugana


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