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[WIP] A Halloween to remember [Page 4]
Added 2020-10-03 09:12:14 +0000 UTCAnd another wip page, hope you'll like it!
Comments
Thanks for the correction Secret, it's true that it works better!
2020-10-04 22:14:32 +0000 UTCThanks a lot for the corrections, Ricardo!
2020-10-04 22:14:00 +0000 UTCThanks, always liked the design!
2020-10-04 22:13:47 +0000 UTCThanks a lot!
2020-10-04 22:13:17 +0000 UTCMomo is just too cute in diapers to not be wearing them all the time.
blarg1
2020-10-03 18:21:07 +0000 UTCOh and her hero name is "Creati" with an I
2020-10-03 18:01:44 +0000 UTCI really love how you draw abenas! It’s neat seeing medical brands in your art.
Krakenfox
2020-10-03 16:16:13 +0000 UTC"...The after effects of her quirk don't seem to weaken." "Momo convinced us to use briefs to protect ourselves and avoid drawing attention. Unfortunately, this *Underwear* Is anything but discreet" Just a few things to clean up the grammar here Soap. Otherwise, it's a great page!
Ricardo de Cervantes
2020-10-03 15:44:45 +0000 UTCSome changes: "Momo convinced us to use briefs". The part about the underwear doesn't flow well. So I would personally change it to "Unfortunately, this 'solution'... is anything but discreet" just so you don't have to deal with the plural form of whatever underwear is that makes the sentence sound weird.
2020-10-03 14:27:11 +0000 UTCGood job Momo :3 <3
Matt
2020-10-03 11:06:52 +0000 UTC
