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[WIP] A Halloween to remember [Page 4]

And another wip page, hope you'll like it!

[WIP] A Halloween to remember [Page 4]

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Thanks for the correction Secret, it's true that it works better!

Thanks a lot for the corrections, Ricardo!

Thanks, always liked the design!

Thanks a lot!

Momo is just too cute in diapers to not be wearing them all the time.

blarg1

Oh and her hero name is "Creati" with an I

I really love how you draw abenas! It’s neat seeing medical brands in your art.

Krakenfox

"...The after effects of her quirk don't seem to weaken." "Momo convinced us to use briefs to protect ourselves and avoid drawing attention. Unfortunately, this *Underwear* Is anything but discreet" Just a few things to clean up the grammar here Soap. Otherwise, it's a great page!

Ricardo de Cervantes

Some changes: "Momo convinced us to use briefs". The part about the underwear doesn't flow well. So I would personally change it to "Unfortunately, this 'solution'... is anything but discreet" just so you don't have to deal with the plural form of whatever underwear is that makes the sentence sound weird.

Good job Momo :3 <3

Matt


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