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[WIP] Shits and Giggles [Page 13]
Added 2020-07-03 19:45:45 +0000 UTCWorking on the next page of the Gwenpool comic, hope you'll like it!
Comments
She looks so cute, while she is playing with her plushie;-)
japani
2020-07-05 10:07:40 +0000 UTCshe seems delightfully confused!
2020-07-04 15:46:01 +0000 UTCHappy you like the Wip Bob, and thanks for the corrections!
2020-07-04 11:41:26 +0000 UTCNo chance that it ends here.
2020-07-04 04:29:45 +0000 UTCPlease dont tell me this is the last page. Would totally love at least 1 more page
The very gay girl
2020-07-04 01:50:09 +0000 UTCGods... It is just the WIP, but I fucking LOVE her eyes! Only corrections I'd make are what Josh pointed out about the "make stinky" instead of "made stinky" as well as adding "Wait." at the start of that same speech box in the second panel.
2020-07-03 23:02:34 +0000 UTCThough it is baby talk, so I guess there's some leeway there on it being grammatically correct. :P
Chase Cougar
2020-07-03 22:36:40 +0000 UTCGod I love everything about this!!! Hmm.. I also think it should be "When did I *make* a stinky?"
Chase Cougar
2020-07-03 22:36:05 +0000 UTCI think Gwen is far enough gone that she doesn't realise that she is the one that is poopy at first, thinking it is the plushy she is on. Then she realises it is her.
2020-07-03 22:17:49 +0000 UTCNah, I think missing the "a" works. It is to show she's regressed. Even in her head her English is broken and regressed.
2020-07-03 22:15:45 +0000 UTCI'm not sure what's going on with the second panel. We are supposed to read left from right correct? "It smell poopy" doesn't really work, the word bubbles should be flipped around.
2020-07-03 21:34:35 +0000 UTCSuper cute soap! One correction, "Why am I wearing such *a* pretty dress" besides that, everything looks nice!
Ricardo de Cervantes
2020-07-03 19:49:59 +0000 UTC
