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[WIP] Shits and Giggles [Page 13]

Working on the next page of the Gwenpool comic, hope you'll like it!

[WIP] Shits and Giggles [Page 13] [WIP] Shits and Giggles [Page 13]

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She looks so cute, while she is playing with her plushie;-)

japani

she seems delightfully confused!

Happy you like the Wip Bob, and thanks for the corrections!

No chance that it ends here.

Please dont tell me this is the last page. Would totally love at least 1 more page

The very gay girl

Gods... It is just the WIP, but I fucking LOVE her eyes! Only corrections I'd make are what Josh pointed out about the "make stinky" instead of "made stinky" as well as adding "Wait." at the start of that same speech box in the second panel.

Though it is baby talk, so I guess there's some leeway there on it being grammatically correct. :P

Chase Cougar

God I love everything about this!!! Hmm.. I also think it should be "When did I *make* a stinky?"

Chase Cougar

I think Gwen is far enough gone that she doesn't realise that she is the one that is poopy at first, thinking it is the plushy she is on. Then she realises it is her.

Nah, I think missing the "a" works. It is to show she's regressed. Even in her head her English is broken and regressed.

I'm not sure what's going on with the second panel. We are supposed to read left from right correct? "It smell poopy" doesn't really work, the word bubbles should be flipped around.

Super cute soap! One correction, "Why am I wearing such *a* pretty dress" besides that, everything looks nice!

Ricardo de Cervantes

Cuteeeee~ ❤️❤️❤️


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