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[WIP] A Teen Titan's Toilet Troubles - Page 11

Wip of the next page of the Teen Titans comic, hope you'll like it!

[WIP] A Teen Titan's Toilet Troubles - Page 11 [WIP] A Teen Titan's Toilet Troubles - Page 11

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Wizards man, what a bunch of jerks!

Ahah, soon soon!

Yep!

There's a spell for the Unholy Diaper of Whatever it's called, but not a cleaning spell? I think somebody was a jerk when writing that spellbook.

blarg1

Hope Raven gets a caregiver soon... She doesn't seem to be up to the challenges of living with the potty monster...

Eberhardt85

At least you didn't sit on it Raven, that would make clean up even worse.

will there be new page of A2-4L this month, I'm just asking

Thanks Alana!

in that case, for revisions, if you are trying for past tense grammar, what Hyro said works. If you are trying for Present tense "At least it's over and no one can see me." and what you have in the second panel works if it is all in present tense, but Hyro's correction changes it to past tense

Thanks a lot for the corrections Hyro, I'll make sure to rewrite that for the final version!

Oh, I'm perfectly okay, this way I can correct my grammar mistakes, that's very helpful for me!

Are you okay with people pointing out grammar mistakes and/or misspellings? or would you rather we didn't? EDIT: DIdn't see Hyro's comment until I had refreshed, I feel a tad dumb >~>

Beautiful! She should say "no one saw me" though. And "pretend none of this ever happened." Rest is fantastic though!


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