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[WIP] A Teen Titan's Toilet Troubles - Page 08

And a work in progress of the next page of the comic, hope you'll like it!

[WIP] A Teen Titan's Toilet Troubles - Page 08 [WIP] A Teen Titan's Toilet Troubles - Page 08

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Yes, it's about the stomach cramps, I just forget to add the SFX ;)

I think she's saying 'not again' about the stomach cramp. She doesn't seem aware at all about why she would be afraid or hallucinating a terrifying potty, based on the dialogue directly following that.

She shouldn't be saying "not again". The personalities in Raven's mind have their own little world that affect Raven on the outside, but she doesn't actually experience it or know what's going on. So this would be completely out of left field for her.

Thanks for the correction Secret!

Thanks Ricardo!

hehe Zatanna rules... actually that kind of spoils it a little, thought they are easy to translate.

(R)Owen(a) Hero

One quick correction, should be "a hallucination" instead of "an". Besides that it looks good. I can only imagine what horrors a mystic diaper has seen.

Great work so far soap! The grammar and spelling has be very good recently! Keep up the good work

Ricardo de Cervantes

"Here is No Escape" , Not ominous at all lol

Nekkie Kyu Bie

oh this wont end well for you raven.

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