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[Comics] The Experiment - Page 10

Latest page to date of the Overwatch comic, hope you'll like it! 

Only one page of this comic this month but the next two should be the last ones!

[Comics] The Experiment - Page 10 [Comics] The Experiment - Page 10

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Hehe, You should suggest it in the Fan Art section, I'll be down to draw some Sombra!

No need to be sorry about anything, Tom, thanks a lot for your support!

Thanks a lot for the feedback, Not! I might change a few lines but I think I'll keep the text in the second box.

I think all the overwatch characters need this treatment

I want to see this happen to Sombra

Hey Soap, sorry about having to cancel but I am having some financial troubles right now. I have really enjoyed all of your work and hope to be back in a few months. Good luck with everything.

Eberhardt85

The art is 10/10. Magnificent! But maybe the dialogue could be changed a bit to make it seem less repetitive and more like her intelligence is dropping in real time to infant level. Like not so many "fesh"'s and just more pauses between the words. Or maybe instead of "I'm becoming stoopid" or "stoopid fesh gooooood", maybe "I'm a...baaaaaby" and "Baaaaaby...good." And so on. Again, this is just me thinking out loud. If you don't want to or can't change it, that's perfectly fine. Again, top notch work!

nottheking

I second that! This page definitely hits all the right chords. :)

Chase Cougar

Dang, I hoped she would become lewd to diapers but this works too

This is getting real good

Serena


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