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[WIP] The Experiment - Page 08

Wip of the Overwatch comic, hope you'll like it!

[WIP] The Experiment - Page 08 [WIP] The Experiment - Page 08

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Thanks for the suggestion, king, I'll maybe change that!

Personally, I think "babbling baby girl" rather than "babbling idiot" would suit the scenario better, but that's just me. It would make Widowmaker sound a bit more motherly and less malicious, but I don't know if that's supposed to be the vibe here. Can't wait to see this one finished!

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Thanks a lot Secret!

Some dialogue fixes as usual. "Once all the indicators are at zero" "A girl who doesn't even care" "I must say I'm impressed this machine works" "We can push this thing"

Thanks!

Love it!


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