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[WIP] Adventures from Dimension A24L [Page 13]

Wip of the current page, hope you'll enjoy!

[WIP] Adventures from Dimension A24L [Page 13] [WIP] Adventures from Dimension A24L [Page 13]

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Great page so far! Each panel is very well done : )

Jeynai

Thanks Ricardo, all the modifications have been made!

Thanks Secret!

I agree with secret, but believe "Well, well, is *this* how mommy taught you how to eat, little girl?" Woild agree more since the action she is referring to is still happening/present. Also, in the first panel it would sound better as "Here comes the airplane!" As a cute baby phrase.

Ricardo de Cervantes

I think "Well well, is that how mommy taught you to eat, little girl?" would fit better


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