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Yeps, it's a mental regression story!
2018-04-20 21:56:08 +0000 UTCThanks Mithers! I already have the page done but I'll see if I can replace "honey" by "sweetie" so it reads better.
2018-04-20 21:55:48 +0000 UTCSpelling stuff for ease of reading: "Sum-Sum, stop fidgeting!" what you wrote isn't wrong, just reads a little strange. "So much" also works as Ricardo pointed out. "I cooked you a surprise honey!" The comma makes it read like she cooked honey for summer. I hope people don't cook honey, that sounds awful. Think of the of comma as a natural pause while talking. "Honey, I cooked you a surprise!" is where the comma would be used. You're awesome man, thanks again for doing cool stuff like this.
Mithers
2018-04-20 20:06:42 +0000 UTCWill her mind go eventually?
2018-04-20 16:09:46 +0000 UTCThere was a public part planned!
2018-04-19 21:36:33 +0000 UTCIt's not going to be that much really ^^ Don't hype too much!
2018-04-19 21:34:24 +0000 UTCThanks for the correction Ricardo!
2018-04-19 21:33:54 +0000 UTCAh, so that's where Rick got the nickname "Sum- Sum" from
2018-04-19 21:10:33 +0000 UTCI wonder what's 4 Supper?
Baltan2
2018-04-19 19:58:05 +0000 UTCI'm sure this might already be part of the plan, but an extraordinarily embarrassing/public messy diaper would be AMAZING for this. Please!
2018-04-19 17:20:07 +0000 UTCoh boy, i can't wait to see what that "surprise" turns out to be!
FreehandBarricade
2018-04-19 17:09:59 +0000 UTCLooks great Soap! One recommendation I have is instead of "this much" have her say "so much" in the first panel. It's not an error, but it reads better.
Ricardo de Cervantes
2018-04-19 15:31:38 +0000 UTCA new scene with many details! I'm looking forward to it : 3
Jeynai
2018-04-19 15:30:39 +0000 UTC
