This is gonna be the next drawing. It's Celestia on a pool while she's texting with Sunset Shimmer.
The occlusion layer has to be refined, especially in Celestia. I would probably put a secondary light in front of her to distinguish it from the occlusion layer. The main light (which will be the sun) is already prepared so I would work on it properly.
Things I'll add:
-Refine the occlusion layer
-Blushed face
-Details for the eyes
-Shadows
-Her body has to be wet for the pool
-Brightness
If I have 0 problems, this would be ready for tomorrow.
Thanks for your support and I hope you like the final result!
Love,
RT
Engineer35892
2018-11-03 22:07:49 +0000 UTC