MLP 80 - A present for Fluttershy (sketch comic)
Added 2018-05-18 08:33:38 +0000 UTCIt's been a while since I haven't made a comic.
This is a comic I've made about Starlight giving Fluttershy a game as a present thinking she would play a cute game. I think most of us have thought that way when we played Doki Doki Literature Club.
The dialogue might be different in the final result. In the second panel Rainbow Dash wouldn't say "Ok". In the third panel Starlight would say "I don't remember it" instead of "I don't know". Speaking about the dialogue, I've written uppercase words because, if I had written it in lowercase words, I would have given you the feeling that I write as a dentist or a president.
I'm gonna be a little bit busy today because of homework, but the final result will be ready for tomorrow. If you have an idea to make the dialogue better in any sense, plase let me know.
Last but not least, thanks for your support!
Love,
RT
