Fashion Business: Monica's Adventures - Episode 1 (FULL) JUST RELEASED!!!

Thank you for appreciate words!!!

DecentMonkey

Thank you for your support! What mistakes in the story do you mean?

DecentMonkey

I've just played through episode 1 (free version) and I'm thrilled with the basic idea, albeit with some subtleties in the B-note. This may also be due to my bad English (currently I write this here with a translation program). Anyway, you have won me with your previous work as a supporter. It was fun to play the episode, although sometimes it was a bit lengthy and I was run over by cars several times. ;) I'm looking forward to the next episode, but if you like, I'd like to go over a few things in Episode 1 with you, to avoid episodes 2 of one or two of the story's mistakes. Or maybe to modernize Episode 1 yet.

Falloutbabe

Hi I’m not gonna say something about the walking , driving and stuff I’m going to focus at the scenario and the rest of the game it’s just perfect man please continue the awesome work!!!!!

I agree pretty much with everything. I would wonder if the game would benefit from a Visual Novel/Ren'Py format. Could help speed things up. The MC design and characterization is the best part.

Alright. If you want to do yourself a favour, don't read the comments over at f95zone, they're pretty harsh. Other than that, I can just say what other people were saying. The minigames are too long, the car driving is annoying as hell, the waiting for npcs to follow, bring food, etc. is way too frustrating to bear. BUT I really like the idea of the story, the models, especially the MC, are the most beautiful 3d models I have ever seen, there's not a single thing I would change when it comes to that. I also like the idea of making the MC a total bitch, it's different from the usual theme of most corruption games. But it lacks H-Scenes. But as you mentioned that next update will have plenty of them, I'll look forward to it :3 But please take some time if possible to change that slow pace and the annoying car rides. If you need any help with writing, proof-reading or anything else, please do not refrain from asking :) This could become a really good game if you listen to the critics ;)

Shakru9

In the following episodes there will be a lot of sexual scenes :)

DecentMonkey

Thanks for appreciate words!

DecentMonkey

Yes, ok, the game has some weak points, I played a second time to be sure. Loading time or ultra long walks of NPC's. But in general I loved it. I even read the final screen. Yes, I loved it. Please continue your awesome art, decent monkey.

Ragnaroekr

The store minigame is way to long

RedTerror

Hi! I plan to release the next version (Episode 2 v0.1) in May!

DecentMonkey

The game looks great, but its so frustrating to play, most of the game is watching the npcs slowly walk around large environments while we wait for them. Also getting someone to do the translation would be good and getting the wording right would be better I think.

Redhatter

What’s bothering me is, there are now 2.500 renders. How long will it take for new content? Half a year?😬

Ragnaroekr

The Story and loading time develops too slow (I hated going by car, even with skipping). Though, I believe in this game, cause the graphics are great, the idea is awesome, and the following updates/episodes definitively need sexual content now. Tons of it. If not, the game will fail.

Ragnaroekr

Ok, so i'm only halfway but got few stuff to say. The intro is too damn long. We're talking hours .And some translations are weird? But i found no bugs with pathing , the plot is fine, the girls are hot. So i'll finish this and expect some following. Good luck

Seyfert94