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WheretheSunsetsButDontShine
WheretheSunsetsButDontShine

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Page Ten Script

Panel 1

Sunset is standing in the middle of an office setting. Cubicles everywhere. She is writing on a clipboard.

Cozy Glow is still dressed in her cravat, blouse, and slacks and making every effort to not stare at Sunset. She is trying to act aloof but should come across as stiff.

SUNSET THOUGHT BUBBLE

It can't be this easy!

Panel 2

Sunset is standing in front of a camera and smiling an evil grin. She’s got a generic, nondescript photo background behind her. On the camera we can see what her student ID picture will look like. There are light stands next to her

SUNSET THOUGHT BUBBLE

There's no way nopony here hasn't thought of doing this before now.

Panel 3

Sunet is framed dead center, walking between cubicles with her same purposeful stride she had in page 2. Various people are peeking out to see her as she passes. They are all in shock, amazement, or embarrassed.

SUNSET THOUGHT BUBBLE

I thought their reactions were momentary surprise or some sort of joke. But they seem seriously upset by my body.

Panel 4

Sunset is back in Celestia’s Office. She is on the left side of the panel, seen from behind. Her right hand is holding a student ID card. Perspective is important here. Sunset is looming large over the right side.

Celestia is standing behind her desk, but she only takes up about half the height of the panel. She has a disheartened look at having to wear clothes again. She is fully dressed and is just buttoning her blouse back up.

SUNSET THOUGHT BUBBLE

I think I’m wearing all I need!


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