Neighborhood Bull -WIP
Added 2022-04-11 02:52:51 +0000 UTCThis is an odd one. My partner had a busy weekend, so I was mostly left to my devices. I'd been plotting out a different story (carnal abbey) and, as often happens, this other idea kept jutting its way into my head. So I wrote three chapters of whatever this is...
For now, here is this. I will decide what I'm going to do with it from this point after a night's sleep. Cheers.
Comments
Yeah, my intent was to leave Darcy mostly adjacent to everything. Build some tension between her and Evan while keeping a clear perspective to switch to from time to time. Otherwise, they keep getting into somewhat zany or nothing-goes-right situations as various archetypes (milf, goth girl, sissy/MtF, cheerleader) get roped into the shenanigans of keeping Evan secret and not bankrupt.
Quixerotic
2022-04-12 19:54:27 +0000 UTCI am liking the start to the story. It definitely is something different. It might be my taste, I'd love a path where Darcy changes but doesn't go Bimbo. I love the thought of smart Milk Maiden who decides to caretake the Himbo and his Herd. As much as I love a good bimbo, I would love to flip the script a bit.
Red Panda Seven
2022-04-12 18:47:41 +0000 UTC
