Consent Is Key (unpaid minipost)
Added 2018-07-15 08:26:19 +0000 UTCI wish there was a word for a short short story. Shorter story? Sto?
Anyway, I've been struggling with momentum lately, and while that's no excuse for sluggishness, it's the reason for it. That being said, I have been writing, and here's the proof!
I really like the idea of a cute, dorky girl who just happens to be capable of near-instant seduction. Sexy Prime was supposed to be about a girl who was almost completely oblivious to her own seductive prowess. While I don't think the idea was fully expressed in the story, it's still a concept that I want to explore again...with Sofia specifically!
In the meantime, I wrote a little snippet of an even dorkier girl: Mary the Succubus, who believes that it is fundamentally wrong for her to use her succubus powers to make a guy like her. Unfortunately for her, she's handicapping herself more than she realizes.
Fortunately for her, she has a guilt-free outlet for her frustrations. Enjoy!
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Both of those are great things, but I mostly just love *this* specific character. ;) She's so adorable! And modelling good behaviour too. (Maybe not *optimally productive* behaviour, but she'll figure it out sooner or later. ;) )
Zyzzyva Nineteen-Thirty-Six
2018-07-17 05:00:21 +0000 UTCI don't want to say TOO much, but you should definitely expect to see Mary in the future! I'm trying to make more multi-part stories so I can stretch my legs when it comes to characterization, and I love the idea of nerdy girls.
Carol J.
2018-07-17 03:32:21 +0000 UTCThat's really great :) Will there be more, or is that the whole story? :)
Zyzzyva Nineteen-Thirty-Six
2018-07-17 03:25:43 +0000 UTCOk, no rush was just checking to see if you had just forgotten to post it. Hope everything's going good on your end
Yshomatsu
2018-07-15 19:04:38 +0000 UTCI'm still in the process of writing it. Unfortunately, momentum is probably the single biggest obstacle when it comes to finishing a story, and I've been struggling to get back in that particular groove. That being said, it's a story that I want to see finished myself, so even if there are occasional detours, I'm definitely going to finish it!
Carol J.
2018-07-15 17:14:45 +0000 UTCDid you ever get a chance to update the Chance or Trance to the full file? Or are you still writing it?
Yshomatsu
2018-07-15 17:03:39 +0000 UTC