All Tomorrows - re-purposing the "defecation" trope while re-writing the Bone Crushers chapter
Added 2023-05-15 12:40:10 +0000 UTCThe All Tomorrows re-write is going to be more expansive and "Stapledonian" in tone; but the bit about the Bone Crushers "expressing affection by defecating on others," was simply too precious to give up! :)
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:) I have long bouts of deliberation over many details like this. What to leave in, what to omit, what to change...
C. M. Kosemen
2023-05-18 06:00:49 +0000 UTCThank you so much Damein! :) Means a lot to get such feedback!
C. M. Kosemen
2023-05-15 17:49:24 +0000 UTCLike the emphasis on them being people with their own society despite their grim appearance. Growing only more excited by the post for the eventual final product.
Samantha Fisher (Not the Video Game Character)
2023-05-15 17:41:52 +0000 UTCGlad you liked it! :)
C. M. Kosemen
2023-05-15 14:42:24 +0000 UTCI always liked the idea that our historian didn't know exactly when things became in fashion or out of fashion and sort of mixed everything together. Glad to see this made the cut though! π
fet mar
2023-05-15 13:25:04 +0000 UTCI was wondering when and where the faeces would appear lol.
Russ1
2023-05-15 12:57:56 +0000 UTC
