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Volume 5 page 132

We have arrived at the dark horizon- the final comic page of Volume 5, as the Mokoi hits its first obstacle:  The surging Alchera ocean.  With it's bladelike limbs, it has no chance of swimming.

And it has no need.

Like the supernatural death messenger it is, the Mokoi simply chooses to walk- nay, DASH across the water.  Now nothing stands between it and its prey, save distance, and precious time.

Ladies and gentlemen, thank you for supporting our work on this book!  The physical copies are being printed now- here is the latest update on the production:

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=YTLkFegIvmk

We'll continue sharing the Volume 5 ending and concept pages here as the physical delivery date approaches.  Then onwards to Volume 6 concept development- and some other surprises as well.  E ) 

Best regards,

-Dave & Liz


Volume 5 page 132

Comments

i wish and say that you will have the best of luck from me and that you may find what you need to protect those who you care and love mace everything is up to you now may you find logos MAY YOU FIND YOUR POWER AND END THE NIGHTMARES ONCE AND FOR ALL don t worry you are strong enough and that you re not alone you have your friends at your side good luck mace

Tomas Donaire

Maybe get it to slow down enough that it sinks?

McClaw

Congrats for finishing up Vol. 5! It's been one hell of an emotional rollercoaster, but I'm excited to see the entire book get printed out! 😄

LaneFurno

Mace is a survivor. The Mokoi has only so much power and the Dreamkeepers can keep it a bay, if not destroy it eventually (Vol 7 or 8? Or maybe 6?)

Willysilver

I beg to differ. It's not over until David says it's over. OH! You mean Vol 5. Right! But the story goes on with all the feels. Vol 6 will be all the more intriguing for everyone. Yay!

Willysilver

It is like that horror movie "It Follows", only your chances to outrun it here are close to zero.

Airvynk

*Chariots of fire playing*......

Synariel

Well now.... ain't that some shit.

Insomni-act

Just curious the appendages on the Mokoi’s back that are not quite wings, do you have a name for them? I ask as I have a character in a story I’m working on with similar ones in my story they are a burrowing desert species and the appendages help them grasp the tunnel walls also they can roll up into sort of a wheel and use them to push along the dunes....alas I’m I can’t come up with a decent sounding name for the things.

TheLoneArtificer

It's over! What a ride! Thanks you two

Rocoro

Somewhere, an Eddie Money like Dreamkeeper is playing a song " Well if I could walk on water and if I could find someway to prove"

Shocken

Ah hell yeah, baby! He’s doing the Jesus sprint across the water lol! Anyways, I’m super glad you’ve managed to finish that fine book of yours. Its been a great ride! So far we’ve seen new places like we haven’t been before and its been great getting to know what those places are - like North Havenville for example. I really cannot wait to see what’s over on the horizon when Vol. 6 development starts! ^^

Charlie Ascende

He looks weirdly adorable when he comes across the water.

Alan Smithee

Interesting that they don't use these guys more often.

Lord Kiyo

Alchera Ocean: *Exists* Mokoi: "I'm gonna do what's called a pro-gamer move..."

Benjamin Varner

Uh Oh!

Eric Ruskoski

Ha ha, oh Mace is in danger...

Death of Ink


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