NYS2 Page 18 (draft)
Added 2017-11-01 09:45:26 +0000 UTCA glance at page 18, with Quart finally slipping off and also unblocking the twins! At least they get to blow!
This isn't the final frame placement, and I do hope to add something to the middle frame there. Perhaps a visual representation of them about to shoot off? Ideas?
Comments
I SECOND THIS!
Azura
2017-11-01 20:16:10 +0000 UTCIf you want an idea for the middle panel, having chibified verson of them laying back with a volcano in place of there lengths would get the point across and be a good call back.
Reiku Yin
2017-11-01 15:42:38 +0000 UTCI like it that she Break Free that shows how Strong she is. ^^
RK-9
2017-11-01 12:37:28 +0000 UTCI'm very much hoping that is still gonna be the outcome, somehow!
Mara
2017-11-01 11:02:52 +0000 UTCOh, fear not, the story is still far from over!
RenTheDragon
2017-11-01 10:28:58 +0000 UTCOh no ,i wanted Quart to get knocked up by russians ,so disappointing...
2017-11-01 10:10:01 +0000 UTCThat actually sounds like a good idea, as it kinda gives the sisters a "Oh shit no!" type of moment when they realize everything's gone wrong.
Azura
2017-11-01 10:00:17 +0000 UTCI'm now suddenly thinking I should exclude the shots of them blowing, and replace them with frames of them realizing that they're about to cum uncontrollably. Maybe save the frames of them actually shooting off for the following page?
RenTheDragon
2017-11-01 09:55:39 +0000 UTCWhat a waste...a chance to knock up one up!
Animeplayer
2017-11-01 09:48:04 +0000 UTC
