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NYS2 Page 15 (Line)

Changed the lower half of the page up. The car pileup needed an explanation, so I changed it to a cute-ish image of Quart stopping off two hoses to help emphasize what's going on. 

NYS2 Page 15 (Line)

Comments

Now this is much clearer than before and makes sense! Great change!

Animeplayer

I like it a lot man.^^ I like it a lot.^^ they gonna pop if they don't release. XD told you they would learn in due time people. XP

White Chapel

I like the change.

Azura

I wonder two things : 1) what would happen in real life if u were to do something like this like with a rubber band 2) how are teh Flankers gonna react, maybe by pulling one out and finishing one at a time ?

marm

This definitely is easier to follow. That little image of Quart makes it comical what she's doing to the Flanker sisters there.

gunstar_1

The trouble with this plan however is that shes gonna have to keep that pressure down for a while or at least til a compromise is made. Still hilarious tho.

Reiku Yin


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