NYS2 Page 8 WIP Updated
Added 2017-02-06 21:05:39 +0000 UTCAlright, here is my second draft for page 8. Edited to include shots with Quart and the Flankers. Thoughts?
And the Ask Me is closed. I'll be posting a response soon!
Comments
Yeah, the Flanker's tits there look a bit bigger. I'll reduce them a touch in the final linework.
RenTheDragon
2017-02-07 02:12:39 +0000 UTCI knew I wasnt the only one interested almost more in Quart&Flankers then Nika&Shandra. Yes, the fact that shes getting doubleteamed is what adds 100% excitment to the action. The fact that shes not only helpless but there's another foe ready to take a turn and she cant do anything beats Nika overpowering Shandra. About this page : The tits of the flanker fuckin Quart are IMO way too big. Quart's tits are already big but another pair of even bigger ones under them as I can see at the bottom left of the page is IMO too much. They should be the same size as Quartz (or, in this particular panel, made a little smaller than in this draft so to not look like they are going THROUGH Quart's body, I dont think anyone will mind) cause otherwise it looks like I am watching a mammal with 8 tits and 2 heads. Look at this page of yours <a href="http://www.furaffinity.net/view/21490682/" rel="nofollow noopener" target="_blank">http://www.furaffinity.net/view/21490682/</a> The Flanker's and Quart's tits are basically just a little bit bigger than their heads. And, but this is just IMO, thats already too much. BUT In this panel the Flanker's tits are more than double her head's size. This is honestly exxagerated. They should be the same size than in the furaffinity page I posted. The rest is ok. Cant wait to hear ur response. I'm looking to be a hell of a help to make this comic perfect :D
marm
2017-02-07 00:53:29 +0000 UTCI like the change up myself. Seeing A-25/Quart getting stuffed by the two flankers honestly is what really got me excited to see this follow on comic with Nika in it. I like the idea of Nika finally catching Shandra, but the extra story arc involving Quart really caught my interest. Maybe it's just that she's getting tag teamed, but I am definitively injoying her parts in the comic XD.
gunstar_1
2017-02-06 22:31:00 +0000 UTCFrom down below, the Flanker is talking about how she is wanting a turn, and how she's getting cold and blue.
RenTheDragon
2017-02-06 21:21:35 +0000 UTCBe still my errection! I am enjoying the panel that Quartz here is getting a great spot, but is that a zoom in on the right side at the mid panel? Can't tell where the zoom in of exactly.
Animeplayer
2017-02-06 21:10:39 +0000 UTC
