Prelude 443
Added 2019-08-11 18:17:04 +0000 UTC
This week's Prelude update! https://www.dreamkeeperscomic.com/Prelude.php?pg=443 Sorry for the delay, setting up our replacement workstation complicated things a bit. But the battle is won- full steam ahead.
Comments
fight! fight! fight!
Shannon TJ
2019-08-12 16:17:16 +0000 UTCThat was kinda the thought! ^^
David Lillie
2019-08-12 15:40:46 +0000 UTCMothra vs Battra?
Daniel Oehm
2019-08-12 04:45:57 +0000 UTCThanks. That's what I figured. I tend to be a grammar cop at times...heh.
Willysilver
2019-08-11 19:22:26 +0000 UTCS H O V E
Benjamin Varner
2019-08-11 19:13:32 +0000 UTCI think it's supposed to be overlapping dialogue. The "if I" is Harmony and the "you'll" is Vanth, the rest is both. I agree it doesn't read well and there were probably better ways to convey that
Zor Underpaw
2019-08-11 19:11:22 +0000 UTCThe text in the last panel looks a bit off... Looks like they're both talking at once. I get it, I think. Page looks great. A little friendly confrontation.
Willysilver
2019-08-11 19:08:08 +0000 UTCThey wouldn't be best friends without a "friendly" dispute here and there! Harmony is definitely the more justifiably cautious of the 2
Garrett Simpson
2019-08-11 18:41:59 +0000 UTC
