Chapter 1135 - Limitations Of The Human Body
Added 2025-05-13 11:27:59 +0000 UTCJake had entered this final stage of the fight with quite a few injuries, but so had the Chimera. In fact, between the two of them, the Chimera was definitely the worst off. While whatever Umbra had done had increased its overall power, she hadn’t healed the monster at all, and whatever poison permeated its system remained as powerful as ever.
Defensively, the only new addition was the cloak, but it wasn’t as if the B-grade lacked durability in the first place. The addition of the cloak made cutting attacks ineffective, but he could still stab through and penetrate flesh.
When he got a chance to retreat slightly and release a barrage of arrows, he also learned that he could penetrate the cloak with those. Explosive arrows had little effect as the cloak nullified the destructive mana for the most part, forcing him to stick exclusively to the stable variant.
Overall, Jake estimated the power-up to the Chimera wasn’t huge. It had added more means of combat to the monster, though, especially with its two flying shadow daggers that were a pain to deal with. Especially seeing as Jake was in quite literal pain every time he had to parry anything.
The axe swings were simply too powerful for Jake to deal with, especially now. Even if he merely deflected the blows and didn’t take the brunt of the hit, he still felt a tang of pain every time. Vital energy was doing its job, trying to heal Jake’s hands and fingers constantly, but just couldn’t keep up, seeing as Jake couldn’t exactly take a break and relax.
Despite things being tough, Jake remained confident, though. He still had a few cards up his sleeve, after all.
Diving into the melee once more, Jake dodged in between the tendrils and summoned a set of stable arcane barriers to block an incoming shadow dagger that flew at him from behind. Stabbing forward, Jake landed another nice jab, but he had to quickly retreat afterwards as an axe came down from above.
Circling around the B-grade, Jake tried to make use of his better mobility and smaller frame. As he got behind the Chimera, Jake noticed something. The Shadow Realm appeared less dark at the B-grade’s back, and his body felt lighter and faster, which was when he realized it.
Those flowers... their magic only works frontally.
Jake wanted to punch himself for not figuring it out faster, though even if he had, it was doubtful how useful that knowledge would have been. The tendrils themselves could turn without the body having to, meaning Jake was only free from the flowers’ influence for less than half a second. Enough for him to land another quick stab, but not enough for anything more.
Retreating away, Jake avoided both daggers, but two spear-tendrils came quicker than he had anticipated, putting him in the tough spot of having to choose between the axe and the spears. The choice was clear as Jake had his thigh pierced, the attack luckily not strong enough to go all the way through.
He also used this as an opportunity by dismissing one of his katars and grasping the vine once it pulled out of his leg. Right as it was in his grasp, his hand began to glow a deep green as Touch of the Malefic Viper activated, sending a flood of poison through the tendril and toward the main body of the Chimera.
The B-grade quickly tried to make Jake stop, but Jake managed to avoid two hits while still keeping hold of the tendril. His grip was too strong for the thin appendage to get itself free, but the Chimera still tried to pull him all over the place.
Finally, an axe came that Jake couldn’t dodge without letting go. Right before the attack reached Jake, he held out his hand as an explosion of arcane mana sent him flying back with sudden speed, dragging the tendril along with him... right into the path of the axe.
The Chimera screamed as it cut off its own tendril, poisoned blood flying everywhere from the amputated limb. With a small smirk, Jake quickly pulled out his bow and took full advantage of the B-grade’s lacking experience and combat prowess once more.
It shouldn’t come as a surprise, but overreactions to taking a lot of damage were a great way to take even more damage. Most creatures considered competent learned to fight through pain, or didn’t feel it in the first place. At least they had some way to deal with the pain. Evidently, the Chimera was not one such creature as it reeled back in agony, giving Jake time to release a far more powerful follow-up than he should have any right to.
An Arcane Powershot charged for several seconds, blasting into the shoulder region of the reeling Chimera, piercing straight through the cloak and into the flesh and bark of the B-grade.
His aim had been far from random, as Jake had targeted close to where one of the flower-tendrils connected to the rest of the Chimera’s body. Initially, he had only hoped to maybe blow off the tendril, but with the extra time provided by the Chimera’s pathetic reaction to losing a single tendril, he had aimed for more.
The entire shoulder section was blown off the Chimera, including the tendril that was sent flying into the Shadow Realm, the flower of flesh wilting after being separated from the B-grade.
This attack seemed to shock the Chimera back to reality as its survival instinct finally won out over its reaction to pain. Annoyingly so, despite losing one flower, the suppressive effect on Jake hadn’t lessened in the slightest, meaning Jake probably had to get rid of both to free himself fully.
Something that would be quite difficult, as the B-grade was back to attacking, now with newfound fervor after losing two tendrils. The small one Jake had made the Chimera cut off itself wasn’t healing either, due to the effects of Touch and all the other poisons coursing through the B-grade’s system.
Despite losing one of his methods of attack, that didn’t make things any easier for Jake. Quite the opposite. The Chimera had been more arrogant and confident after its power-up, but as the fight had continued, it realized Jake still wasn’t an easy target. Its confidence had slowly morphed into frustration and a slight sense of desperation which colored its attacks.
Usually, this wouldn't necessarily be hard for Jake. A powerful opponent losing their cool and attacking wantonly was a good thing under normal circumstances, but this B-grade was never skilled enough at fighting for it to have any effect. One would expect that when technique and coordination started to falter, it would have a negative effect, but for the Chimera, its desperation only made its attacks faster and stronger.
The constant onslaught of axes, daggers, tendrils, and even the B-grade trying to ram him with its entire body, put Jake solidly on the back foot. He was pushed back repeatedly as he continued to dodge, block, and deflect as much as he possibly could, the damage accumulating with every passing second.
This reckless attacking method did leave plenty of openings for Jake to exploit, but he had a hard time committing. If he wanted to strike back, he would have had to get close to the Chimera, putting him in a dangerous situation. What’s more, with the current state of his hands, Jake wasn’t even sure he could put all his power into them without his fingers falling off.
Something needs to change, Jake told himself as he did something he had delayed doing. Using the special function of his necklace, a Malefic Health Potion appeared inside his mouth as Jake munched down on the entire thing, allowing the flood of vital energy to rush through his body.
Mentally, he tried to control as much of this energy as possible towards his hands, fingers, and even his wrists, which were also starting to experience trouble. Jake instantly felt his situation improve, and he got a second wind to strike back, landing a few stabs in exchange for more cuts marring his own body.
He was still waiting for an opportunity to get the final flower tendril out of the way, but the Chimera was very defensive of it, even with its semi-desperate fighting style. With the flower still up, ranged combat wasn’t a feasible option. While the effect was barely noticeable while near the Chimera, Jake considered committing and potentially even sacrificing something in exchange for taking down the last lotus.
However, even having to do something like that felt... insulting. The only reason he even had to consider something like that was because of the damn state of his body... no, not his body, his damn hands.
Jake knew Toughness wasn’t his highest stat, and it never would be, but he had still never suffered this badly. Sure, he often felt the heavy impacts rattle through his body when he had to block something, and the bones in his fingers had broken at least a few thousand times, but usually it never limited him.
With a good flow of energy and his Soulshape intact, Jake could continue to use his body as normal, even if it was severely damaged. Things like muscles and tendons shouldn’t be what limited Jake, and in some ways, they still weren’t. Jake could still forcefully move his hands and fingers like normal. The problem was that if he punched too hard or blocked a too powerful blow, his fingers would just... bend. Break.
Something no amount of energy or stable Soulshape could stop from happening.
At this point, the fight wasn’t solely about beating the Chimera but about Jake overcoming himself and this obvious weakness he had uncovered. He hated the feeling, and slowly, many of his plans were washed away by his stubbornness.
Did he have a Protean Arrow prepared? Gaze? Moment? More uses of Eternal Shadow? Yes, to all of them, but Jake didn’t want to use them. Not now. Not as a crutch for him to escape his own shortcomings.
Instead, he foolishly faced the challenge head-on.
As the fight continued escalating, the two exchanged blow after blow in a vicious brawl. The Chimera’s durability and longevity were truly its most outstanding properties, as despite Jake doing all he could to inflict more poison and even using Touch a few times here and there, the B-grade was refusing to fall.
With the shadows empowering it, the monster gladly made use of the environment as it continued to absorb energy from all around it. The cloak also kept mending itself by absorbing shadow energy whenever Jake managed to damage it, leading to a less-than-stellar cycle.
Jake’s belief that he had an advantage as long as he dragged things out rapidly faded away as the Chimera didn’t seem to tire at all, no matter what he did to it. Especially not after he realized just how much energy it was constantly getting from the Shadow Realm, as that was definitely a part of Umbra’s influence he could do without.
That meant he would have to do something drastic to get back his advantage, and Jake was wracking his brain for what to do. Especially about his hands. He considered many possibilities and searched his memories for what he had done in the past, and a few ideas emerged, with especially one memory standing out.
He remembered the time he battled the Hive King termite. How he had failed to penetrate its carapace with normal attacks and how trying to stab it had been a downright painful experience, as it felt like punching a wall. Back then, he had infused his entire body with stable arcane energy right as the Hive King charged into him, all done in an attempt to stand perfectly still while also increasing his durability.
Sure, he was still absolutely wrecked by the Hive King and used Eternal Shadow to avoid taking lethal damage, but the concept had worked to some extent. Of course, things weren’t as simple as just infusing his hands with stable arcane mana. If it were, he would have done so a long time ago, and technically, he was already infusing his entire body with stable arcane energy through Arcane Awakening whenever he used his boosting skill.
Say Jake did infuse his hands with stable arcane mana. It would turn them rigid and not even that much more durable. It definitely also wasn’t a healthy option, and there was a reason that the last time it was done in combination with Eternal Shadow.
Yet... he felt like he was onto something. At least partly. He scoured his memories for other ways, and an obvious one that entered his mind was naturally Carmen, but he instantly knew her methods weren’t ones Jake could use. She made her entire body into a living weapon through a long period of forging it, and her entire Path as a Runemaiden was what allowed her to be what she is today. It wasn’t something Jake could mimic on the fly.
However, there was one person in Jake’s memories who was both a human and had managed to display what Jake would call superhuman durability and resilience, even among other superhumans. A man who could stand before any beast unarmored and unarmed, yet most would still agree he wielded every advantage. Someone who was perhaps the strongest melee combatant in the entire multiverse:
Valdemar.
He was someone who would never let the limitations of the human body inhibit him... no... he probably didn’t even believe his body had any limitations in the first place, and if something did bother him, he would barrel through and fix it through sheer will and his Transcendent fighting aura.
Jake was pushed back yet again as an axe had gotten too close for comfort, leaving a cut down his front. By now, his entire body was filled with wounds, the Chimera growing in confidence as Jake had a hard time finding opportunities to attack with the current state of his body.
He did get a brief opportunity now as he tried to apply some kind of temporary measure. Strings of arcane mana appeared and wrapped around both his hands to try to keep them together, even if every bone was broken.
The Chimera didn’t seem keen on giving him more time as it charged once more, Jake meeting it head-on as he directly parried a shadow dagger before proceeding to punch forward with a Piercing Fang.
Power rushed through his arm and hand as he struck the B-grade directly in the chest. The katar went straight through the cloak and into the bark. However, at the same time, the force also went back into Jake’s hand and arm, and at this point, even if he had applied wrappings of arcane mana, his poor fingers had reached their limits.
All four fingers broke entirely at their base from the katar, pressing into them as his hand buckled unwillingly. Jake grimaced in pain and quickly pulled back, but in the process, he had to let go of his katar, as he could no longer open and close his hand.
Instead, the four fingers just hung limply, barely connected to the rest of his body anymore, and the only reason they had even stayed attached was due to being encased in his tattered gloves.
His only lucky break was that the Chimera had been sent back from the attack, giving him a brief moment as he stared down at his broken hand. He tried to close it into a fist, but there was no reaction at all.
Move.
As the Chimera stabilized and quickly positioned itself to attack again, Jake just stood there and looked at his mangled right hand, a feeling of anger and indignation welling up inside of him. He simply refused to acknowledge his body was this weak. That he couldn’t even handle his own attacks. Sure, he could understand something like Arcane Powershot taking a toll on the body as that could be charged infinitely and was only limited by his own durability, but this current situation?
It was unacceptable.
With his left hand, Jake took out Eternal Hunger again and forcefully placed it in his right hand. Closing his eyes, Jake took several deep breaths even when the Chimera was upon him.
Stability...
Using his arcane energy to make his hand more stable wasn’t a good option. He already knew that... but he wasn’t entirely on the wrong track. He already used Arcane Awakening to flood it with arcane energy, so he needed something else to be the source. Something far more fundamental.
From the front, two axes began descending toward Jake, yet he remained unmoving as something stirred in his mind. The two axes got ever-closer until finally... the world slowed.
Jake had entered his Moment of the Primal Hunter as he remained unmoving, the world entirely still. Eyes still closed, Jake appeared within his own Soulspace for a brief moment as he connected with a certain set of Records within them. These Records began to be given form within his Soulspace as he had a very vivid memory associated with their Origin.
Records mixed with memories and his Willpower inside the Soulspace, as in the outside world, his otherwise mangled hand began to give off a slightly foreign aura. The completely ruined fingers began rapidly healing as they forcefully reattached under the influence of this aura and Jake’s will. As they mended, one by one, the fingers slowly closed around the handle of the katar, the world started moving once more.
Comments
Tyftc
Chloe
2025-08-03 22:07:29 +0000 UTCTYFTC!
Rachel Clements
2025-06-17 17:37:03 +0000 UTCNot sure if someone already made this joke but this chimera kinda feels like a shadow human-like version of Venasuar. Instead of a giant frog/toad it is a crocodile. The flowers being the giant flower and the tendrils obviously vine whip lol. Anyways tyftc.
Trumangolorian
2025-06-10 16:12:12 +0000 UTCThanks for the chapter
Kt-x
2025-05-15 11:12:12 +0000 UTCTyftc
bioticisbasic
2025-05-14 23:14:30 +0000 UTCIs this the first hints of how he will improve his Human racial form?
Razeel Nightfall
2025-05-14 11:15:04 +0000 UTCTyftc
SuperAzureReader
2025-05-14 01:29:20 +0000 UTCThank you for the chapter
joel southard
2025-05-13 22:37:41 +0000 UTCTranscendent abilities exist outside the purview of The System, so their Origin is beyond any ability that could be derived from The System; i.e. you'd need a special Bloodline or Transcendent skill to steal Transcendent skills. There's only two possible ways that Jake could steal Valdemar's Transcendent skill right now. 1. Jake's Bloodline awakens a new ability to steal Transcendent skills, and he uses this new ability to steal Valdemar's Transcendence. This is just straight up impossible; when Jake unleashed his Bloodline during the Colosseum battle, he explicitly stated that he couldn't control Valdemar's Transcendence because it had an Origin that belonged to Valdemar alone - if Jake's Bloodline couldn't interact with Valdemar's Transcendence when it was fully unleashed it sure as shit isn't going to do it now. 2. Jake awakens a Transcendent skill whose purpose is to steal Transcendent skills, and he immediately uses it to steal Valdemar's Transcendence. This isn't going to happen: "Jake just stood there and looked at his mangled right hand, a feeling of anger and indignation welling up inside of him. He simply refused to acknowledge his body was this weak" - Jake's Bloodline is clearly throwing a tantrum at the moment because it doesn't like how weak his body is, so whatever's happening is being motivated by his Bloodline. When Villy first tells Jake what Transcendent skills are, he explicitly states that one of the hard rules imposed by The System is that you aren't allowed to use a Bloodline power to create a Transcendent skill because it's considered cheating. If Jake were to create a Transcendent skill he'd have to turn off his Bloodline to do it; with his Bloodline going into overdrive at the moment it's completely impossible for him to form a Transcendent skill.
Alex
2025-05-13 20:43:33 +0000 UTCAnd before Jake uses it and just turns into a baby
patrick__starz
2025-05-13 20:35:15 +0000 UTCTrue body of the primal hunter kinda sounds cool.
Austin Barton
2025-05-13 20:31:53 +0000 UTCTyftc
John Durrett
2025-05-13 20:11:45 +0000 UTCHands of Man?
heltok
2025-05-13 19:55:55 +0000 UTCThanks for the chapter.
Joshua Little
2025-05-13 19:50:59 +0000 UTCI'm leaning towards the first sage willpower is where this is going
Beef Wrench
2025-05-13 19:41:45 +0000 UTCI think the First Sage's records bleed into the system itself. Valdemar is the one whose records go into all the humans.
Shane
2025-05-13 19:40:27 +0000 UTCStealth from eversmile?
Kristopher Hanson
2025-05-13 18:09:38 +0000 UTCJake is out shopping for primordial records like there at the supermarket, Stealth from eversmile Aura from Valdemar Shadows from Umbra Poison from Villy Who’s next on the chopping block
Christopher Robin Sævre
2025-05-13 17:47:23 +0000 UTCFascinating development. Stubbornness for the win!
ABTelford
2025-05-13 17:37:08 +0000 UTCUpgrade to meditation.
Rahsheem Reid
2025-05-13 17:37:04 +0000 UTCNo transcendents for hake hes too bloodline-y. How can you transcend what already perfect
matthew strong
2025-05-13 17:18:52 +0000 UTCa) taping into the first sage records, learning to use uno reverse on his fists b) stealing from valdemar like the little heretic he is
Thenais
2025-05-13 17:14:05 +0000 UTCTFTC, can't wait for this breakthrough
frotes
2025-05-13 17:13:36 +0000 UTCI bet it’s an upgrade to fangs of man
GreatCabbage
2025-05-13 17:06:51 +0000 UTCTftc!!!!
Jose Reyna
2025-05-13 17:03:27 +0000 UTCThis but a simple grammatical error, And only due to perspective of how the series has been written as a whole. The line isn’t efficient the “has” should be dropped not altered to” had.” But go ahead and make a simple error a blast at the author not caring enough for the story he has on more than one occasion stated he has written this story for himself but is nice enough to share. Think it would be best to understand that these chapters are mostly a rough draft that probably have only had atmosphere a couple passovers for error.
Jordan Rogers
2025-05-13 16:34:26 +0000 UTCMaybe the first sage’s encounter with the void beast… UNO Reverse the damage to the chimera. Tftc
CocoaBleu
2025-05-13 16:29:11 +0000 UTCT for Troll?
Jordan Rogers
2025-05-13 16:28:50 +0000 UTCTYFTC! Is it possible that, through the records of the First Sage, which bleed into every human in existence, that Jake can access or gain enlightenment (thru meditation) to Valdemar’s records? He already has Fang of Man, maybe that can be the missing link. I think that in the long run, Jake’s connection to FS and his Harbinger of Primeval Origins might lead to him learning a mythical or transcendent skill from all the other Primordials
Microwavey
2025-05-13 16:16:32 +0000 UTCT
2025-05-13 16:02:05 +0000 UTCI bet it's a transcendent skill which burns records to heal himself. Nasty little things.
Richard Loveless
2025-05-13 15:57:30 +0000 UTCTftc!!! Can’t wait for fucking tomorrow!
Jeryd Greer
2025-05-13 15:33:44 +0000 UTCLetssss gooo!
Kasey Lindenmayer
2025-05-13 15:00:27 +0000 UTCTyftc very good one today
islandcastle11
2025-05-13 14:35:34 +0000 UTCAgreed! And even without using his smelly pot! Uncle is the best.
EmmieCurls
2025-05-13 14:34:46 +0000 UTCWith jealousy of course!
Ty Cooper
2025-05-13 14:25:41 +0000 UTCEither the first Sage or valdimar
Ty Cooper
2025-05-13 14:18:40 +0000 UTCI don't think it is private. I just think it is connected to everything through shadows. I have a feeling Villy can watch, if just because he can track the blessing
Ty Cooper
2025-05-13 14:17:32 +0000 UTCI was thinking that Jake really just stole Valdimar’s transcendent ability.
Nathan Holliday
2025-05-13 14:15:55 +0000 UTCWell it will be an upgrade, right? Sadly he isn't getting any archery upgrades. Tftc.
Ty Cooper
2025-05-13 14:15:25 +0000 UTCI wonder what Villy thinks of him being pulled into the shadow realm… or is Villy even able to live stream him from there since it is Umbra’s divine realm? I get the feeling Umbras realm is more private that yaggrasrlls…..
Suzanne Pearson
2025-05-13 13:50:07 +0000 UTCThanks for the chapter
BlackRazaras
2025-05-13 13:44:39 +0000 UTCusually at least one person guesses stuff like this beforehand, but I don't remember anyone suggesting using Jake juice in combat to return his body to its original condition.
brjenness
2025-05-13 13:31:09 +0000 UTCI feel like Jake is gonna wind up as the Harbinger of Primordial Origins. He will have records from all the primordial, eventually.
Keith Williams
2025-05-13 13:21:53 +0000 UTCI honestlyhave no clue what the origin is he is gamiliar with.
Gavin Wayne Pitcher
2025-05-13 13:21:09 +0000 UTC?
Garand
2025-05-13 13:14:09 +0000 UTCShould be, “Jake wanted to punch himself for not figuring it out faster, but his hand was too mangled.” Jk
dqmj7vmn6t
2025-05-13 13:06:01 +0000 UTCEdited it
Zogarth
2025-05-13 12:56:09 +0000 UTCTFTC
Cory S.
2025-05-13 12:54:24 +0000 UTCREE!!
Sylphie
2025-05-13 12:46:58 +0000 UTCUpgrade to fangs of man. Might even be making a version of fangs of man in the primal hunter class
William WIlson
2025-05-13 12:42:29 +0000 UTCTtfc
Dave
2025-05-13 12:39:47 +0000 UTCThis might be the upgrade needed to face a true dragon. No way those lizards will make easy to cut
Mat
2025-05-13 12:28:20 +0000 UTCI originally thought it was going to upgrade fang or f man, but I like this theory better, upgraded boosting skill using records from the ultimate boosting skill. wonder what the name would change to, something combining “fighting spirit” and “arcane supremacy”
Tom
2025-05-13 12:25:47 +0000 UTC"Explosive arrows had little effect, though the cloak nullified the destructive mana for the most part." -> "Explosive arrows had little effect though, the cloak nullified the destructive mana for the most part." The comma before though suggests that what is after is despite what is before.
kiewitz
2025-05-13 12:22:41 +0000 UTCTyftc!
Staudi
2025-05-13 12:22:14 +0000 UTCThe Bro aura
Tom
2025-05-13 12:21:53 +0000 UTC"Those flowers... their magic only works frontally." -> "Those flowers... their magic only works directionally."
Tyler Poole
2025-05-13 12:19:22 +0000 UTCBut given that the bottle is glass and won’t break in a stomach crunching is required
Zizawah
2025-05-13 12:19:17 +0000 UTCI think this fight will end, but Z always has a cliff in store. I also think B rank was the original thought for being able to wield his bloodline, but as it’s ‘evolving’ each grade, I think it might not stop even in the god realms, slowly working up to the ‘creative mode’ we saw in the Jake vs Valdimar fight
Tom
2025-05-13 12:17:42 +0000 UTCThanks for the chapter
Tilen Praprotnik
2025-05-13 12:07:50 +0000 UTCIt was stated in an earlier vision of the first sage that any kind of energy could be turned into vital energy. When the first sage was teaching villy about healing potions I think, he was freely manipulating and energy and turned it into vital energy. With what jake did in the coliseum, turning the sand around him into its origin which is just energy. We might be seeing the same concept here and him fully being able to use his bloodline as he gets closer to B grade
Yahyo Malikov
2025-05-13 12:07:38 +0000 UTCValdemar is the next primordial to get their records stolen with perhaps Fangs of man as a connection. Just my thoughts
Sprightly Ebbie
2025-05-13 12:06:08 +0000 UTCThat’s an interesting question. Wouldn’t matter for umbra though she’s not a primordial
Scoutmaster2002
2025-05-13 12:05:27 +0000 UTCTranscendence nah. Maybe just like he stole records from umbra he his also going to steal records from Valdemar with the fangs of man skill
Sprightly Ebbie
2025-05-13 12:04:51 +0000 UTCWonder if this'll be a new skill or an upgrade
Rick Delallata
2025-05-13 12:04:42 +0000 UTCI think it was theorized in an earlier book that at B grade Jake would be able to wield his blood line unsuppressed? Is Jake getting his first taste of what unfurling his bloodline at B grade will be like now that he's approaching peak C grade? Will Z leave us with a monstrous cliff hanger on Friday? Stay tuned for the next episode of Dragon Ball Z!
Steven Myer
2025-05-13 12:02:34 +0000 UTCThanks for the chappy
dash w
2025-05-13 12:01:44 +0000 UTCCan Primordials label Jake as a Heretic? We know normal Gods can't from the time the insect God tried to label him and he just shrugged it off
Orod
2025-05-13 12:01:33 +0000 UTCSheesh thank sylphie that it's not Friday I couldn't deal with a cliffhanger rn
Kristopher Hanson
2025-05-13 12:01:06 +0000 UTCtftc :) Jake has unlocked "Eternal Finger"? On a side note the "Innate consumption" property of Jakes necklace seems to imply that the potion is directly deposited into the stomach rather than the mouth but youre the authority here so didnt want to bring it up as an edit. Suggested edits: "punch himself for not figuring ** out faster, " missing word "it" "vine right as it pulled out of his leg. Right as it was" repetitive phrasing. Maybe "Once it was" instead for the second? "a deep green as Touch of the Malefic activated, " not necessarily wrong but usually its either the full name or just Touch isnt it? "but *too strong reactions* to taking" maybe "overreactions" instead? "I need to do something, Jake told himself *as he did something he had been waiting to do.*" the back half of this sentence is clunky and mostly redundant. Maybe "triggering an ability he had held in reserve" instead? "Jake to overcome himself and this obvious weakness he had uncovered within himself." repeated "himself" maybe just ditch the last two words? "he foolishly faced the *challenged* head-on." should be "challenge" "infused his entire *body* with stable arcane energy right as the Hive King charged into his *body* " repetition maybe just "him" instead for the second?
Xander
2025-05-13 11:59:48 +0000 UTCAura of Man, passive transcendence taken from Valdemar like the heretic he is. Let’s go.
Lynderyn
2025-05-13 11:58:57 +0000 UTCFantastic! This is absolutely brilliant. Jake grows during adversity
Rewdan
2025-05-13 11:56:05 +0000 UTCArcane Supermacy upgrade maybe? That's the skill that reforged his body, and this seems related.
Endern
2025-05-13 11:56:02 +0000 UTCOh boy here Jake goes stealing more shit from gods.
Matthew Smith
2025-05-13 11:53:36 +0000 UTCJake Juice!!! Actively using it!
S.w.
2025-05-13 11:52:47 +0000 UTCTftc
Fdrugc
2025-05-13 11:50:58 +0000 UTCYes, thank you for the chappy Zogarth!
JJB4345_80_815
2025-05-13 11:48:02 +0000 UTCTftc
IntenseSushi
2025-05-13 11:47:23 +0000 UTCTftc
Matthias
2025-05-13 11:43:26 +0000 UTCFangs of man upgrade! Let's go.
BumAssBumAss
2025-05-13 11:42:23 +0000 UTCUmbra watching Jake also tap into the records of Valdemar aswell XD
Arrogant Savant
2025-05-13 11:41:40 +0000 UTCOH BOY ITS GO TIME BOYS AND GIRLS
Phoenixdrop
2025-05-13 11:41:35 +0000 UTCCalled it
Exaiter
2025-05-13 11:38:33 +0000 UTCIs it a new skill Is it a skill upgrade Is it a transcendent Tune in next time to find out
Abdulaziz ALRumaih
2025-05-13 11:38:25 +0000 UTC🔥🔥🔥 chapter!
Apollo Greed
2025-05-13 11:37:28 +0000 UTCJake wanted to punch himself for not figuring (it) out faster, though even if he had, it was doubtful how useful that knowledge would have been.
Alexander C Hyde
2025-05-13 11:35:47 +0000 UTCThanks for the chapter!
Arieh Sochaczevski
2025-05-13 11:33:53 +0000 UTCThanks for the chapter
Connor
2025-05-13 11:31:45 +0000 UTCUpgrade SCHWING
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Beemoss
2025-05-13 11:29:26 +0000 UTCParty time.
Loststar7
2025-05-13 11:29:04 +0000 UTCLet's go
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