Chapter 1119 - "Great... just great."
Added 2025-04-21 10:33:48 +0000 UTCJake’s entire body was battered and broken, and all he could realistically do was just try to keep everything together. As he saw the Rainbowfeather Sovereign recover in real-time, his already aching body started to hurt even more.
Looking at his resources, things weren’t great there either.
Status
Health Points (HP): 101,313/302,775
Mana Points (MP): 130,291/533,531
Stamina: 90,123/303,175
While none of them were critically low, all of them were falling rapidly and at an accelerating rate. Especially his stamina and health points were a concern, as the longer his Arcane Awakening stayed active, the more he consumed just keeping himself moving.
In fact, by now, Jake could only move normally because of the sheer amount of power circulating through his fleshy vessel. The second he deactivated Arcane Awakening, the backlash and weakness would likely be enough to, if not outright, knock him out, immobilize him entirely.
Meanwhile, the Sovereign took a deep breath as his own injury healed, and he turned toward Jake again.
“A gift from a hunter I once spared for accidentally invading my territory. He was a skilled alchemist, from what I gathered, and ending his life would have meant an inability to access his spatial storage. I was impressed enough to keep him around for a while to create potions for my flock until other hunters arrived in an attempt to free him, and I killed the elf upon realizing he was no longer worth the hassle.”
Jake didn’t respond but just took this brief moment to catch his breath and try to control the energy coursing through his body just a little more efficiently than before. His senses focused, and his entire body was clear to his inner eye. Subtly, he managed to direct the flow, helping him just a little as the B-grade no longer seemed inclined to give Jake a break.
Why would the Sovereign? All his external wounds were already mostly healed.
I still have a chance, Jake reaffirmed to himself as the bird leaned forward and stepped down, launching itself forward. One Step ahead, Jake teleported and twisted around before releasing an arrow that split into a dozen, only to be met with a sound wave to block it.
Trying to get some kind of momentum going, Jake shot several other arrows as the B-grade shot for him again. One of them landed, drawing a bit of blood, but Jake also had to flee once more as he found himself in a less-than-advantageous environment. The open air above the Grand Lake gave the Sovereign ample space to make long, swift jumps, while Jake had a hard time dodging.
Thinking on his feet, Jake’s next teleport took him down onto the surface of the lake, a decision that proved wise. He had originally hoped to shoot another arrow, but the Rainbowfeather Sovereign hesitated to jump for a moment, allowing Jake to shoot several in a row.
Rather than shoot straight down for him, the Sovereign shot down and to the side as it slid across the water and kicked toward Jake. Jumping to the side, Jake chose not to teleport this time around as he began using the surface of the water like it was solid ground.
At the same time, he also pulled out his two katars as the two engaged in melee combat, as one thing had quickly become clear:
While the Sovereign could use the water offensively in combination with its sound attacks, it was also afraid of truly entering it. If it was because of birds in general not liking to be in water or because of what lurked below, Jake naturally couldn’t know, but what he did know was that he would use this to his advantage.
Jake constantly moved back as he even made the water erupt and splash onto the bird at times to try to limit its movements, or perhaps just annoy it. For a few moments, he also considered diving, but remembering the sound attack, Jake chose not to, and he felt pretty damn confident that the bird had practiced that kind of attack precisely because it knew its own weakness in water.
Nearly a full minute passed as the two danced across the water, creating tall waves from their constant clashes, and while Jake did try to get back toward the island and cover of the jungle on several occasions, the Sovereign was fully aware of Jake’s intent and moved to stop him at every turn.
Feeling his resources dwindling even further, Jake knew he had to change things up. He had landed a few blows himself, but he was fully aware that in several of those instances, it was because the B-grade willingly traded blows, knowing it was in a far better state than him.
Trying to get some kind of advantage back, Jake decided it was time to deploy one of his hidden cards. He had managed to hold back from using it for a good while, meaning the cooldown and cost of the skill had both been reduced significantly, so the next time he had even the slightest opening, Jake moved to strike.
He narrowly dodged a kick as he jumped back and drew his bow. At the same time, another version of himself appeared and closed in to try to stab the B-grade in the chest with a cursed katar. For a brief moment, the bird was unsure who to go for, but upon seeing Jake charging a quick Arcane Powershot, it decided.
Slipping by the version of Jake striking in melee, the B-grade shot forward towards the “real” Jake, who was charging an arrow. With no time to continue his attack, Jake released the Arcane Powershot immediately, striking the foot of the Sovereign right before the foot struck him.
An explosion of arcane energy shook the surface of the lake and sent water flying everywhere as Jake was kicked square in the stomach, the taloned foot powerful enough to create a hole through his stomach. The bird had guessed right, and the version of Jake with the bow had been the real one… or, well, it had been right before it had been struck, anyway.
Rather than see blood and guts flying, the Sovereign instead found itself surrounded by destructive arcane mana and a dispersing shadow. Before the bird could fully comprehend what had happened, an arrow struck it from behind and sent it flying.
Jake had switched places with his Eternal Shadow right before he had been struck, and the clone he entered had already been in position for Jake to release a quick Arcane Powershot the second it became “real.”
Nocking yet another arrow, Jake kept up the assault and even used the Rapid Fire function of Timeless Focus as he sped up his shooting further. Dozens of arrows were shot every second toward the still-stabilizing Sovereign, most of them finding purchase as this sequence of events had worked out far better than Jake could have hoped.
However, he had far from turned the tide. The Sovereign was soon stabilized fully and moved to dodge every arrow, no matter how much Jake tried to curve and bend them, all while closing in on Jake again.
A moment later, the Sovereign entered Jake’s sight, now looking worse for wear, with a piece of flesh and feathers missing from its back and a few arrow wounds covering its body here and there. Still, its aura seemed to have only grown stronger and more tenacious as the Songbird released a massive shockwave of sound that forced Jake to summon a stable arcane barrier to try to defend himself.
The barrier shattered, and Jake was sent tumbling back with the B-grade in rapid pursuit. With a quick blast of arcane mana, Jake barely avoided a kick and instead suffered yet another scratch that sent his blood flying into the air.
His entire arm was mangled already, and as he dodged again, Jake swung while tensing up muscles, sending blood flying toward the head of the Sovereign. It hit the B-grade in the eyes, making the bird screech in pain as the blood sizzled and burned due to its toxic properties.
Sadly for Jake, he had no way to take advantage as the screech of pain doubled as a sound attack and sent him reeling back. By the time he moved to strike, the Sovereign had already wiped the blood away and just looked more pissed than a second earlier.
Still, Jake had done some damage and had found a bit of new hope. Yet just as that hope flourished, the Sovereign once more proved its own power. Closing in on Jake, its aura spiked as a barrage of rainbow feathers were shot out, but rather than go for Jake, they began circling him a few dozen meters in all directions.
At the same time, the Sovereign knelt down and took a deep breath. Jake’s danger sense exploded as all the surrounding feathers contracted and shot toward him, and in the very same instance, the B-grade shot forward with more speed than ever before.
Jake focused all he could as he used a skill he really hoped to avoid. Gaze activated as the B-grade was frozen in the split second he was in mid-air, allowing Jake to barely dodged out of the way, albeit while taking half a dozen cuts from feathers.
Taking out his bow, Jake turned and wanted to capitalize on his use of Gaze… but he had severely overestimated how effective it would be. While the skill had frozen the Sovereign, it had been briefer than Jake expected, meaning by the time he was ready to attack, the Sovereign had already summoned a platform of mana beneath both its feet as it exploded into motion once more, this time at close proximity.
There was no time left to dodge properly anymore. At most, the best-case scenario would be to sacrifice an arm, but Jake knew that if he did that, he would have no chance of victory anymore. So instead of dodging, he did the exact opposite.
The regular arrow Jake had nocked was switched out for his Protean Arrow, which had been completed only half a minute earlier. It was a hastily made one, and it far from lived up to the potential of the skill, but for now, he would have to be good enough.
Jake had barely started channeling Arcane Powershot when the foot closed in on him, and as it did, Jake jumped straight backwards to give him just a sliver more time. His leap backwards still put him in the Sovereign’s direct path, and his danger sense exploded as a fatal blow was upon him… and as a final response, he claimed the moment.
Time slowed down all around Jake until it came to a complete standstill. Jake also stood frozen, as the only thing that functioned was his mind. In this world where the concept of time was made null, a hundred thoughts whirled around in Jake’s mind. He looked at the frozen picture that appeared in front of him and saw the talons of the powerful B-grade glisten with blood from Jake’s body, but also the bird’s own blood from the Arcane Powershot he had landed earlier.
He saw the many other wounds on the Sovereign, and he saw his own body. Jake had ample time to fully understand his own state, and it truly wasn’t looking good. Not like there was anything he could do about it here and now… instead, he had to move.
Ever-so-slowly, as Jake willed it to, time began resuming. Timeless Focus in combination with Moment of the Primal Hunter allowed this very little time to have a lot of impact as his Arcane Powershot was charged up at an utterly insane pace, Jake also pouring in every bit of Hunting Momentum he had built up. Because time affected Jake differently during this period, his leap also rapidly widened the distance between him and the Sovereign as he prepared to land a devastating attack.
But… things didn’t always go according to plan.
As time moved once more, he saw the realization dawn in the Sovereign’s eyes. A platform of mana began slowly appearing beneath the kicking foot to stop the blow before it would even connect with Jake. He could release his arrow here and now, but he knew it wouldn’t be fast enough. The Sovereign was still a good seven meters from Jake, and Jake’s backwards momentum while Moment remained active was too high, meaning by the time he released his arrow, he would already be over twenty meters away.
Another Gaze was out of the question as Jake knew it wouldn’t end well for him. With time slowly resuming, Jake let go of the string, but contrary to his body or energies, the arrow didn’t travel with the effects of Moment. It only slowly moved forward, and as his ultimate survival skill was slowly winding to an end, Jake wished for nothing more than his arrow to travel faster.
He wished for it not to take such a long time to arrive, as if it too was affected by Moment of the Primal Hunter… which was when something clicked.
Jake asked himself why he had tried too hard to control the concept of time within the arrows when an answer had been right there all along. Jake couldn’t control the concept of time with any of his skills. It wasn’t something he was capable of. No… no, rather than control the concept of time, he denied the concept’s control over him. He denied its dominion and forced himself to stand outside of it.
The combination of Timeless Focus and Moment of the Primal Hunter had made Jake’s Path forward clear to him, and rather than control the concept of time that affected the Protean Arrow… he denied the concept’s control over it.
And it listened.
With no warning or indicator of any kind, the Protean Arrow sped up, and right then, Moment also came to an end. The Sovereign, who looked as if it would dodge Jake’s Powershot, opened its eyes wide as the arrow appeared far faster than any of Jake’s previous attacks. The B-grade attempted to screech and summon a barrier, but it was already too late.
As the Sovereign had only barely managed to land on the platform it had summoned—a mere fraction of a second away from dodging out of the way—the B-grade was struck by the large Protean Arrow.
The attack penetrated straight through the bird’s chest as a massive dose of poison and destructive arcane energy was delivered into the body of Jake’s opponent. The B-grade was launched back and bounced on the water several times, leaving a trail of blood and feathers in its wake.
Jake stared as he still bathed in the wondrous feeling of his epiphany and the incredible effect it had on the arrow. Sure, he had spent some of the innate energy of the arrow to reduce the effect the concept of time had on it, but it had been more than worth it, as he had struck true.
Over two kilometers away, the Rainbowfeather Sovereign finally stopped itself by forming a barrier beneath its feet to brace against. The B-grade didn’t leap to attack but just stopped as it kneeled down on the water, a massive wound now marring its chest. Jake knew he had done some serious damage… but a B-grade was still a B-grade.
Despite how damaged the Sovereign was, Jake knew this wasn’t over. He was proven right as the B-grade stood up tall a few moments later, staring toward Jake with newfound apprehension but also determination.
Jake, in turn, checked his body once more, and… yeah, it was bad. Very bad. However, if he really squeezed out everything he had, then maybe he could-
Just then, his thought process was interrupted as he felt something. Jake’s eyes darted to the side as, on the horizon, he saw something approach. Then he felt something in another direction, his head turning as he saw something else approaching.
His sudden head-turning caught the attention of the Rainbowfeather Sovereign as it also checked out what was happening… and it was clear this hadn’t been the B-grade’s machinations.
Since the fight with the Warlord, Jake had known he was being observed by the other B-grades on the islands. That was how the Sovereign had been able to get one over him in the first place, as Jake hadn’t found it that odd.
However, now, it appeared these B-grades were no longer satisfied with merely watching as Jake felt the approaching auras of nine B-grades from the islands on the Grand Lake. Each was flying toward himself and the Sovereign at high speeds, and when he briefly made eye contact with the Rainbowfeather, he saw the annoyance and slight sense of distress from the B-grade.
None of them had planned or wanted this to happen, as the situation had just turned a lot more perilous.
Standing there, with so many approaching enemies, Jake felt a wave of exhaustion wash over him as he breathed out a loud sigh while muttering to himself.
“Great... just great.”
Comments
Tyftc
Trumangolorian
2025-05-31 03:26:25 +0000 UTCJake still has his escape skill where he burns his wings, i doubt the bird will escape. Likely the other B grades see this as an opportunity to be rid of them both. Its also possible someone will interfere since they are attacking down a grade in a group, but i think that is unlikely.
Greg Alverson
2025-05-26 18:52:45 +0000 UTCThat is exactly what he did though?
Cees Tollenaar
2025-05-24 20:18:07 +0000 UTCIf Jake can control his senses so well can’t he just turn off his hearing and that will mitigate some of the effects of the sound attacks? The force will probably still be there but the debilitating effects should be severely reduced if not eliminated.
DasGoat622
2025-05-07 02:18:39 +0000 UTCI just imagine something like a roided out Toucan Sam.
Neal Cooper
2025-04-27 06:13:14 +0000 UTCAm I the only one imagining this bird as a rainbow colored big bird from Sesame Street?
Dallin S
2025-04-25 12:38:29 +0000 UTCThanks for the chapter
Kt-x
2025-04-23 12:54:05 +0000 UTCThe b grade will be fighting the entire world worth of these stupid birds.
Jordan Rogers
2025-04-22 10:57:18 +0000 UTCTftc
Lucas
2025-04-22 08:31:36 +0000 UTCOut of the frying pan into the fire. Can't wait to see what Jake does next!
Michael Ferguson
2025-04-22 07:03:27 +0000 UTCJust remembered the gift he gave to that one rare creature… is it time to cash in????
Colby Whiting
2025-04-22 04:12:49 +0000 UTCThat kind of makes me think of his fight with valdimar. He blocked the dudes axe but simple making the space between nothing using a small spec of the void as a shield
Colby Whiting
2025-04-22 04:10:42 +0000 UTCFirst thing I thought about too. More people coming to kill steal and third party his hunts.
TyranT-Rex
2025-04-22 00:54:15 +0000 UTCTyftc
Alec Petherbridge
2025-04-22 00:11:19 +0000 UTCI bet they’re coming for lessons… 👀🧐
Xien
2025-04-22 00:04:56 +0000 UTCTyftc
Chloe
2025-04-21 22:49:41 +0000 UTCnobody is talking about how pissed Jake will be because someone interfered with his hunt...again!
brjenness
2025-04-21 21:31:38 +0000 UTCThe birds are assholes. The b grades are going to fuck the bird up. Nobody likes them.
Dylan Sutton
2025-04-21 20:39:31 +0000 UTCGaze activated as the B-grade was frozen in the split second he was in mid-air, allowing Jake to barely (dodge)dodged out of the way, albeit while taking half a dozen cuts from feathers.
Alexander C Hyde
2025-04-21 20:12:36 +0000 UTCStill, its aura (seemed) only to have grown stronger and more tenacious as the Songbird released a massive shockwave of sound that forced Jake to summon a stable arcane barrier to try to defend himself.
Alexander C Hyde
2025-04-21 20:06:50 +0000 UTCThe second he deactivated Arcane Awakening, the backlash and weakness would likely be enough to, if not outright(,) knock him out, immobilize him entirely. (Is this comms needed?)
Alexander C Hyde
2025-04-21 19:59:27 +0000 UTCYes, it was Villy's child. A son, I believe, but I don't remember a name being given. I think that male pronouns were used but it's been a while... I don't really recall how Villy's wife perished, but it probably occurred closely after their child's.
JJB4345_80_815
2025-04-21 19:26:20 +0000 UTCI am going to laugh if they all showed up to kill the birdy and hopefully not get culled later.
Ty Cooper
2025-04-21 18:43:07 +0000 UTCI do so wonder what he’s gonna pull out of his ass this time, because damn he hasn’t been in such a bad spot in a while
Christopher Robin Sævre
2025-04-21 17:40:23 +0000 UTCOf course you can. Just remember that Jake is the one who has to fight the naughty bird. U can use his smelly pot for the others since he sometimes forgets to use it in fights and likes those shootie sticks
Jeremiah Lambert
2025-04-21 17:39:08 +0000 UTCThat "span" doesn't make sense. Spun is just fine. Spin doesn't make sense. Maybe twirl around but hey that also; kind of doesn't make sense either. You need to remember that span is used for things like "spanning the horizon" and not "He span around to.." Atleast in a third person perspective. (Which Zog writes in 90% of the time.) Second person perspective is fine to use a sentence like "he span around to grab the arrow" Zog uses alot of third and narrator perspective. And doesn't touch on 2nd or 1st person perspectives alot, atleast so little that it doesn't matter anyways.
Jeremiah Lambert
2025-04-21 17:31:15 +0000 UTCLooks to a royal rumble is about to go down the real question is how many factions/the battle will be setup 1 group vs 1 group or 1 vs many or 1 group vs 1 group vs 1 hunter?
Ender419
2025-04-21 17:28:48 +0000 UTCthinking back to some discussions we had during the build up to yappers demise.... near end of book 6...villy releases killing intent while talking about the bloodline accords. . Jake chose not to ask... it was during the 7th era that someone went after someone with a bloodline that they shouldn't have and tye accords were made. villy's family?
brjenness
2025-04-21 16:14:42 +0000 UTCI wonder if it'll turn into a free for all? The other b grades are rivals and probably didn't coordinate, so a free for all is probably Jake's best bet other than his escape skill.
kingofshibainu
2025-04-21 15:46:24 +0000 UTCHe still has his wings to escape, while he is in "danger", he's not really in danger. I'm pretty sure he's going to have to run away to live to fight another day. Or team up with the bird.
Matt
2025-04-21 15:40:02 +0000 UTCWell in like the last ten chapters I think it was explained that auras effectively work as damage reduction from those in a grade below( like due to fear/grade suppression) which becomes more and more severe in higher grades. So while mortals don't know it yet due to their low grades, Gods see it as invaluable ability for higher grade to get higher tier records, because it's more likely for a genius who can resist tier suppression to win cross tier battles.
Artem GhostiX
2025-04-21 15:30:31 +0000 UTCSo does Artemis step in to save Jake? Is one of the B grades a snake? Will Jake flare his aura to show off he is the chosen of a primordial? Will he go down in a blaze of glory? Will he trigger the first sages ability to kill void gods at c grade? Will the lake monster emerge from the center of the planet and eat all the b grades? Will Ygg teleport him out and be all I need you for the next part of the fallen kings revival now? Will Villy or dusk leaf RKO the b grades outa no where?
Ira White
2025-04-21 15:28:40 +0000 UTCDamn Jake really used the classic “I reject your reality and substitute my own” on time itself.
Oblivion
2025-04-21 15:05:04 +0000 UTCAwesome turn of event, can't wait for this weeks chapters!
frotes
2025-04-21 15:03:20 +0000 UTCYou know. Something has been bugging me for like…. Forever. The Gods we’ve interacted with have all put WAY more stock into being able to resist presences than any of the mortals. Hell the mortals all treat it as kind of a gimmick. What I mean by “gimmick” is that other than Jake’s version none of the others matter or seem to matter in the eyes of mortals. But every single god of high status we’ve interacted with has put WAY more meaning behind that ability existing on anyone. To the point they are handing out blessing like candy to anyone who gets it. Yes there could be an argument that it’s all to get closer to Jake but that only seems true for the Gods of low power and status. It’s almost like that ability is directly tied to how far one could potentially walk in their path……
AsuraFalling
2025-04-21 14:45:07 +0000 UTCWe were told every flap of his wings uses mana, he can probably get far enough with only one. When he was chasing after the Prima Guardian he went so far that it even took Sandy a while to fetch him.
Tr0LLach
2025-04-21 14:16:04 +0000 UTCYes, thank you for the chappy Zogarth!
JJB4345_80_815
2025-04-21 13:55:39 +0000 UTCRainbowfeather Sovereign already stated its path is revenge based. I think it teaming up with Jake would break its path.
Lynderyn
2025-04-21 13:55:24 +0000 UTCAre the two of them going to team up? That would be cool
Tristan Lewis
2025-04-21 13:52:10 +0000 UTCYa but I think Artemis meant to control the concept in a way not to out right deny it that seems like a Jake way of thinking and doing something he shouldnt be able to do lol
Pretzel Warrior
2025-04-21 13:50:05 +0000 UTCHe will need to wait for the potion cool down and then down a mana potion before he can use wings. That function eats through a lot of mana. Honestly though it is kind of nice he is struggling with resources. It’s clear even if the rainbow bird is pushing him that he is more powerful but he isn’t so much more powerful that starting with Arcane Awakening fully active and an already dwindling resource pool costs him.
Nathan Holliday
2025-04-21 13:44:26 +0000 UTCThank u for the story
C0bra$
2025-04-21 13:40:11 +0000 UTCOh yeah just straight up denying a concept is a lot stronger than simply controlling it because if you control something like time even if it only takes a single moment the smallest measure of time possible it will still take time but if you deny time than the cause can happen at the exact same moment as the effect at the highest level of power anyway and honestly it wouldn’t even matter unless your fighting a expert in time magic but when it matters it MATTERS
Phoenixdrop
2025-04-21 13:33:47 +0000 UTCGreat chpt!
ABTelford
2025-04-21 13:30:45 +0000 UTCwhen 9th try's to escape wonder twin powers activate and Jake finishes it with a protean toucan arrow
brjenness
2025-04-21 13:27:06 +0000 UTCOhhhh are we about to see some bloodline shenanigans coming into play?
Daniel Hamilton
2025-04-21 13:26:05 +0000 UTCSo in the end he doesn’t not use momentum but it is some kind of time shenanigans
Phil Ritter
2025-04-21 13:05:04 +0000 UTCRight. Wings should get him far enough to get to the checkpoint/ exit
Phil Ritter
2025-04-21 13:02:59 +0000 UTCTime to use his escape skill, get beamed up by Artemis, and rest until round 2 can begin
Leviathan
2025-04-21 12:34:37 +0000 UTCDenying Concepts is an awesome next step with his bloodline. I dont follow your concepts i am the concept - Jake 2025
Drexnaw
2025-04-21 12:32:14 +0000 UTCIt directly stated that nevermore couldn’t help with the recovery from going all out In the Colosseum of mortal. Only time would help. Which took him like 10 months to a year to recover. The “potion” never gave him just replenished his Jake Juice
kinglemur
2025-04-21 12:29:20 +0000 UTCHe’s not defiant mate, he’s arrogant. He’s cocky, he’s above it all. He’s not try to resist anything, to be considered defiant, he’s going to resist simply because he knows he can
Kyler
2025-04-21 12:28:37 +0000 UTCTo be fair he had a pretty high baseline resistance to the damage his boosting skill does. He’s just never had to push it this far which hopefully builds to an even more broken boosting skill
kinglemur
2025-04-21 12:24:55 +0000 UTCThankies
Phasmatic7
2025-04-21 12:18:46 +0000 UTCJust deny the concept of time and let it fly by! Visualize moving through the planned events of the day 1 mile after another.
Aaditya Ravindran
2025-04-21 12:16:10 +0000 UTCTime to team up lol
Posiden 300
2025-04-21 12:12:20 +0000 UTCGreat chapter. This would have been a good one for Friday. Thank you for not hanging us with this one. Look forward to tomorrow’s chapter.
Cory S.
2025-04-21 12:10:12 +0000 UTCI'm glad to see Jake finally have a problem with using his boosting skill. He has always seemed to be able to use it without any negative consequences except for feeling tired at the end sometimes.
Jul Silver
2025-04-21 12:04:02 +0000 UTCBig fishy plant to the rescue 🛟
Thenais
2025-04-21 12:03:54 +0000 UTCAlso yes, leave the concept of time to the Sword Saint. Though, now that Jake will just defy the concept SS needs to start incorporating the void and the void of time into his attacks.
Ryan Ulrich
2025-04-21 12:02:42 +0000 UTCTFTC :) Well shit. I guess I should have realised no one wants to see resources and records go to waste so why wouldnt a power struggle lead to everyone wanting a piece of the pie. Seems like this is gonna be another great week :) Thanks again you mad genius for once again proving why you are the author not me. Suggested edits: "I still have a chance, Jake reaffirmed *himself* as the..." it's either "to himself" or ditch the himself. "Jake teleported *and spun around and released an arrow*" Replace the first and with a comma. Also it should be "span". I think there was one of these last chapter or the chapter before now that I think about it. "Still, its aura only ** to have grown stronger" missing word "seemed" "Jake swung *his arm* while tensing up his arm," repetitive. maybe ditch the first "his arm" "Because time affected Jake differently during this *time*," repetitive phrasing. Here you can ditch the second "time"
Xander
2025-04-21 12:02:33 +0000 UTCTeam up time?
Ryan Ulrich
2025-04-21 12:01:30 +0000 UTCI think the bloodline description will soon need an update in the list of skill it provide, so I wanted to make a proposition : Bloodline skill: -Transcendentale perception -Aura of defiance -Primal control
atome 4 000
2025-04-21 11:48:47 +0000 UTCIf he's just nullifying time on his arrows instead of speeding them up, it works better as an upgrade for his unblemished arrows skill than for his archery skill. Just a thought
austin kutz
2025-04-21 11:48:35 +0000 UTCREE!!
Sylphie
2025-04-21 11:45:56 +0000 UTCHappy 🪺
Thenais
2025-04-21 11:40:35 +0000 UTCSo Jake can either use his Wings to retreat to the other side of the planet, or use Jake Juice to kill 10 B-grades but suffer potentially months of being out of commission. We don't know to what degree Nevermore helped with the fallout when he used it in the Challenge Dungeon vs Valdemar. Third options is for the big bad underwater B grade to bail him out. Or even the teleporting squirrel thing.
Tr0LLach
2025-04-21 11:38:59 +0000 UTCFantastic chapter. Thank you.
Loststar7
2025-04-21 11:34:57 +0000 UTCThanks for the chapter!
Arieh Sochaczevski
2025-04-21 11:33:45 +0000 UTCJake learning how to deal with vultures. It hasn't happened before because on earth, enemies that match him were a lot more spread out
BumAssBumAss
2025-04-21 11:32:27 +0000 UTCYeah. Kind of obvious now that we see it. Zog did a good job keeping us struggling with thought processes similar to jake's when the answer was obvious. I like it when a story fools ms and I really like it when it makes me feel dumb afterward.
brjenness
2025-04-21 11:31:48 +0000 UTCThank you for the chapter
joel southard
2025-04-21 11:29:53 +0000 UTCOur boy is not built like that.
Unlisted Pokémon Hudson
2025-04-21 11:29:47 +0000 UTCI don’t know if his body can handle that strain Maybe if he uses some Jake juice
Abdulaziz ALRumaih
2025-04-21 11:22:54 +0000 UTCTweedy the Roid Raged Bird: "Well, these are unforeseen circumstances...." Jake: "WOOB WOOB WOOB WOOB...*runs away*"
One Winged Angel
2025-04-21 11:16:54 +0000 UTC"Time isn't the boss of me"
Bryn Thomas
2025-04-21 11:11:28 +0000 UTCJake and the rainbowbird say fuck these guys and 2v9 the B grades
LongMickeyRicky
2025-04-21 11:10:43 +0000 UTCThanks Zogarth can’t wait to read how Jake takes out all these B grades as he improves his timeless arrows
Rewdan
2025-04-21 11:10:39 +0000 UTCWow, I knew Jake was eventually going to get time arrows but anti time arrows is way crazier than what I had in mind
Rick Delallata
2025-04-21 11:08:43 +0000 UTCSuch a Jake thing to do Saying fuck off to a fundamental aspect of the universe
Abdulaziz ALRumaih
2025-04-21 11:07:58 +0000 UTCTftc
Matthias
2025-04-21 11:06:01 +0000 UTCYftc
Beemoss
2025-04-21 11:02:57 +0000 UTCJake might have to use his escape skill. But maybe his potion timer will elapse
Jordan Rogers
2025-04-21 11:02:51 +0000 UTCWell Jake already planned on killing them all, and they pretty much all know once in awhile a hunter shows up to cull them, so as the hunter is wounded makes sense to end him now. Plus they for sure what to make sure the bird dies with his flock he probably is the most dominant
Jordan Rogers
2025-04-21 11:01:45 +0000 UTCThe locals coming in to confirm the kill, all of them, and to claim the new territories opening up. Just when Jake thought he might win.
Unwillingmainer
2025-04-21 11:00:31 +0000 UTCYep, time to spread his wings and bail out
Seiryus
2025-04-21 11:00:10 +0000 UTCTftc
Zachar Holma
2025-04-21 10:57:05 +0000 UTCNo respect for the 1v1.
Sayjinlord
2025-04-21 10:56:26 +0000 UTCDid I just read Jake asking to speak to the manager of Time because he was dissatisfied with the product and he got the system to issue him a refund without having a receipt? Aeon Arc here we comeeeeee!
Steven Myer
2025-04-21 10:54:11 +0000 UTCThe third party bro smh 🤦
Burkes
2025-04-21 10:53:19 +0000 UTCWhat a great chapter!!!!!
John Kinkead
2025-04-21 10:53:18 +0000 UTCThanks!
John Kinkead
2025-04-21 10:53:06 +0000 UTCThanks!!!!!
John Kinkead
2025-04-21 10:52:49 +0000 UTCIt seems these B Grades have no respect for the one on one fight, the battle between hunter and prey.
Jason Hardman
2025-04-21 10:51:38 +0000 UTCTime to Wings out of there
SinCinnamon
2025-04-21 10:51:27 +0000 UTCCongrats.
Jason Hardman
2025-04-21 10:50:28 +0000 UTCTyftc
Profile Name
2025-04-21 10:49:43 +0000 UTCThanks for the chapter.
Joshua Little
2025-04-21 10:49:22 +0000 UTCNot to take that away from you but no, actually I was first.
Jeremy O'Kane
2025-04-21 10:49:11 +0000 UTCfuck that now I want it to be tomorrow even though that would mean i have to go to work
Frederik
2025-04-21 10:45:40 +0000 UTCThank you :)
Terry Robinson
2025-04-21 10:43:44 +0000 UTCGratz
Dave
2025-04-21 10:42:24 +0000 UTCTftc
Dave
2025-04-21 10:41:59 +0000 UTCThanks for the chapter
Tilen Praprotnik
2025-04-21 10:39:05 +0000 UTCWild SCHWING
SCHWING PAPI
2025-04-21 10:35:28 +0000 UTCTyftc!
Brendan O'Sullivan
2025-04-21 10:35:26 +0000 UTCI have numerous seconds. It feels like Jake won't retreat. Yet whenever he had been outclassed in the past. His initial fight with the ants for example, he retreated and returned when better prepared. He never set out to hunt the rainbowfeather, he completed his planned hunt. So with more B grades coming why not withdraw?
TwistedVanity
2025-04-21 10:35:12 +0000 UTCThanks for the chapter
Connor
2025-04-21 10:35:11 +0000 UTCThank you
TwistedVanity
2025-04-21 10:34:52 +0000 UTCI’ve tried for YEARS!!!!! Huzzah!
John Kinkead
2025-04-21 10:34:30 +0000 UTCI’ve done it!!!! TFTC
John Kinkead
2025-04-21 10:34:13 +0000 UTCFirst
John Kinkead
2025-04-21 10:34:02 +0000 UTC