I'm not sure what days I'll post this in a week, maybe Monday/Saturday. We'll see where I settle on.
Page 2, They meet. However wasn't the red-head the late one? Looks like a dialogue mix up. I've done that too.
As for the art, check out the camera angles to make it more interesting, the ease of his lines and even the warm desert colors. A master at work!
For those of you interested in exploring more of his work, check out his old blog. There is a date menu on the lower right panel: http://wildebeest-art.blogspot.com