Chapter 624: Just the Start
Added 2025-11-12 00:45:01 +0000 UTCComments
What happened to blitz ? Did I miss something?
Jon
2026-02-11 02:28:46 +0000 UTCIm fucking exctied for this!!!!!!
Yaldabaoth
2026-01-23 13:54:08 +0000 UTCTyftc Centered text for titles notifications, and status sheets looks much more natural/ like it’s actually us reading the system note rather then just reading the text of the thing.
Jeroen Turkstra
2026-01-23 12:08:17 +0000 UTCThink you meant faster not slower time dilation for the time prison. For a rate of 1 day origin to 7 days time prison time is moving faster in the time prison
Pickled Rick
2025-12-03 14:43:06 +0000 UTCCenter text works well - different flow lets it stand out more as an 'aside' somewhat.
Ashrothe
2025-11-15 18:13:50 +0000 UTCRegarding the text centering, I don't mind either way, but would personally prefer them to be in text. Did you know that by using a picture they disappear from the chapter emails we've been getting after you remove the chapters from Patreon before a release? For example, book 8 'Level 250' (chapter 522) now has a bunch of 'the linked image cannot be displayed...' messages instead of the congrats and stats messages from the system when I look at them now. Also, I'm kinda hoping the new system does drop all the old contract details as seeing 'Natalie Savannah via Malorie Stewart' (instead of Malorie Fields) tickles my borderline OCD every time I see it.
Brian Dibbins
2025-11-13 20:53:17 +0000 UTCCenter text was great!
Bryan
2025-11-13 17:13:26 +0000 UTCThanks for the chapter!
Arieh Sochaczevski
2025-11-13 08:12:10 +0000 UTCCENTERED TEXT FOR MY VOTE
Kyle Davis
2025-11-13 07:07:22 +0000 UTCSlower? “Can… you make it pass slower?” If 2 hour pass on the outside, and only 1 hour pass on the inside, then the inside pass time slower, and you can only do half as mutch? or what is slower/faster refering to? time per time is an odd mesurement..
Puggan Se
2025-11-12 16:46:00 +0000 UTCReally fun series to read. Glad you put it onto Audible, I mainly listen cause I’m always doing something that keeps my hands busy. Thanks for writing
Immanuel Medina
2025-11-12 12:17:41 +0000 UTCCentered for sure. Makes it feel more immersive like we’re actually seeing a little blue screen template somewhat 👍🏼
JW Saxby
2025-11-12 09:29:18 +0000 UTC😭😭 Ended too soon 😅 felt like the scene got cut half way through, I need a more thorough and full rundown of the new notifications, boosts, titles, benefits, stats and such lol ya killing me with the suspense. Tyftc 👍🏼💙🍻
JW Saxby
2025-11-12 09:27:16 +0000 UTCThanks for the chapter! Even if you are making us wait for the rest of the new stuff. 😀
John
2025-11-12 05:11:03 +0000 UTCI like centered. It stands out a bit more. But as another poster said.. whatever is easiest
Shawn Treants
2025-11-12 04:54:14 +0000 UTCCentered looks good to me, but whatever is easiest for you is the most important choice
Jake Rands
2025-11-12 03:54:20 +0000 UTCThank you for the chapter
joel southard
2025-11-12 02:59:36 +0000 UTCOf course we didn't get the status sheet today 😂 Centered looks a little cleaner but it's not a big deal.
BoonePharm
2025-11-12 02:56:42 +0000 UTCTYFTC! Centered text 100%!
atmatos
2025-11-12 02:48:44 +0000 UTCI'm also a fan of the centered text
TDarwin
2025-11-12 02:47:52 +0000 UTCCentered is the way to go!
Harold
2025-11-12 02:43:36 +0000 UTCCentered text works. new system, new interface, new format,
sjmcc13
2025-11-12 02:27:23 +0000 UTCShe is stubborn… and probably has a lot of skills to grind
SunriseCV
2025-11-12 02:06:13 +0000 UTCThe centered text for system notifications is good, it really sets it apart from the regular story text and draws your eyes to the change in page format
Michael Storms
2025-11-12 01:49:12 +0000 UTCI like centered text makes it easy to discern System Info. Excited what chapters will show on Thursday!
Jordan
2025-11-12 01:33:03 +0000 UTCI like the center better - makes it more recognizable as being 'distinct from normal story'. I also think it would be good to include the three (maybe 5) dashes centered as well
Athias
2025-11-12 01:32:01 +0000 UTCI was kinda expecting a giant worm to pop out of the sand and try to swallow them... I love that Silvi and Roman said the exact same thing
Kendal Bozant
2025-11-12 01:30:26 +0000 UTCThanks for the chapter.
Raymond Mouton
2025-11-12 01:30:02 +0000 UTCI think the centered version sets it apart better.
vardic d
2025-11-12 01:24:03 +0000 UTCI like the centered version a little more.
Steven Irvine
2025-11-12 01:19:32 +0000 UTCI think the centering is good honestly. I feel like a balance of the status itself always being on the side makes sense, while notifications feel far more "Real" if they are front and center. You HAVE to look at them. Fine either way, but food for thought. Perhaps leave it for only truly important updates. Pops more that way.
Owen Kaz
2025-11-12 01:05:43 +0000 UTCHaha. I think it may be better to keep it how it has been. I don’t think the ebooks have tables now that I think about it, and they center the other system instead… keeping left aligned may help differentiate it and the other systems in ebook form… Though, I do like the cleanness of centered a bit better.
SunriseCV
2025-11-12 01:03:56 +0000 UTCGoosebumps, man! Can't wait for this new shit. Orodan Wainwright would be very happy with Brandi's suggestion. Good training :)
granndfunk
2025-11-12 01:03:45 +0000 UTCOn the centered text - I honestly don't mind either way. Do whatever works easiest for you. If neither is more difficult than the other, than simply do the one you prefer.
TooOldForThisShit
2025-11-12 01:02:55 +0000 UTCI didn’t even notice, centered or not
Samuel Strode
2025-11-12 01:01:16 +0000 UTCRegarding centered or not - entirely down to you, I’ve no preferences either way. So long as the data is there and any tables don’t get screwed by Patreon I’ll be happy
Iron Akela
2025-11-12 00:59:25 +0000 UTCTftc
Peter Nugent
2025-11-12 00:58:35 +0000 UTCCenter it
Peter Nugent
2025-11-12 00:58:25 +0000 UTCFor me, it being centered feels weird. I might get over it, but been like that for so long, it feels odd to change suddenly. But I'm more about your story than anything, so change is fine if that's what you want.
Melody Haren Anderson
2025-11-12 00:56:41 +0000 UTC