Announcement 26 September 2021
Added 2021-09-26 11:25:43 +0000 UTCThe first 400++ members should have the long-long chapter which shouldn't be named in their mailbox or in a matter of minutes somewhere-somewhere.
For the others, it will be sent tomorrow.
The betaed-chapter of this is most likely going to arrive around the end of October.
Bests,
Comments
While I loved the rest of the chapter and the reveal I do have to agree the fight at the end was really kind of underwhelming especially compared to the Naga fight.
Mordred
2021-10-04 19:34:19 +0000 UTCAs those above me pointed out, the last fight Taylor has was a bit disappointing. I hope it may be rewritten because there wasn't really much impact to it when I read it. It was a bit weird to see that there weren't paragraphs to describe what was happening in exact detail.
2021-09-27 12:52:36 +0000 UTCTwo swords... can she dual-wield? I'm getting dark-elf vibes here.... ;0
Lee Shilo
2021-09-27 12:38:42 +0000 UTCLove it, but would have liked more detail for that last fight. Still awesome though.
Aaron Kay
2021-09-27 04:14:00 +0000 UTCI have to admit I Was disappointed by the last parts fo this chapter. The quality just wasn't there in the last two fights Taylor participated in. The first, eh, I could forgive that to an extent. The last fight though is simply absurd. It's one of the most important fights in the story so far; it reads like the back of a tourist postcard. Details, man, details! If this story is devolving into that type of quality, compared to the Naga fight, you have a serious problem upcomiing with the rest of the tale.
Mordart
2021-09-27 03:24:26 +0000 UTCThis was just amazing... just everything, i can't wait for the next one.
Red Bard
2021-09-26 17:37:23 +0000 UTCThanks a lot!
Antony444
2021-09-26 17:06:30 +0000 UTCNow, now...(evil grin), I hope it's not pessimism in the ranks of the God-Emperor's servants...
Antony444
2021-09-26 17:06:23 +0000 UTCAh, the ideas...
Antony444
2021-09-26 17:05:55 +0000 UTCYou're welcome.
Antony444
2021-09-26 17:05:35 +0000 UTCSo many surprises, wounderfull story.
Ted min
2021-09-26 16:53:25 +0000 UTCThank you for your hard work Antony. At a certain point though, we're going to run out of circumlocutions and ways to allude to this story.
Gabriel Meadow
2021-09-26 15:36:19 +0000 UTCThank you for hard work and god speed to the betas, I am going to reply to this email with potential ideas as I haven’t had time to reply to the 31000 post.
Stormstar1995
2021-09-26 11:57:04 +0000 UTCThank you and the betas for your hard work
Silver Wolf
2021-09-26 11:26:24 +0000 UTC
