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Misty the Water Trainer Page 3 (wip)

Added 2020-10-29 16:24:46 +0000 UTC

You can tell I was unsure of layout and composition by all the crazy pencil lines making half of this thing incomprehensible XD But don't worry! Believe it or not, it's comprehensible to me! It's mostly that I had to keep re-positioning the speech bubbles to allow for a better view of the action, and the panel layout is getting more angled and intense as the pressure on Misty ramps up. You'll notice lots of comics get all janky with the panel layout when the action is happening, as opposed to dialogue scenes.

Anyway, hope you like the update! I'm hoping I'll be able to finish this page early into next month and still have time to complete another, so pages 3 and 4 will hopefully be complete and available to you $10 patrons by the end of November :)