Chapter 1, page 2
Added 2019-03-23 14:34:41 +0000 UTCI, um. May have gone overboard with the personal exposition. Or maybe Rebecca keeps retreading the same thought because that's how a lot of people write their diaries. I'm still getting the hang of this, lol!
At least she had the courtesy of interrupting herself by knocking on Anna's door! :P
Comments
I don't think the diary text is excessive, it's good to know a characters' inner dialog
Michael
2019-03-23 16:41:39 +0000 UTC
