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Feedback Thread | Children of Morn [v0.2]
Added 2023-07-12 12:51:48 +0000 UTCIt's time for another Feedback Thread. Let me know what you think about the game.
And I don't take offense to criticism, feel free to be open and honest. It makes the game better.
Comments
You got a solid gameplay loop. However, this update felt small due to the story content, so I would recommend sperate it into 2 type of update, gameplay, and story.
ihereou
2023-08-02 16:23:58 +0000 UTCLate feedback (I had family visiting for several weeks so couldn't really play). The plot is a slow burn and pretty much took up until this update to really start clicking for me, but I am guessing that the build and mystery are by choice. I am hoping that the back and forth of the MC having questions that Enna cannot or will not answer doesn't become too much of a recurring theme or that there is variation. Again, I can respect that it is part of the mystery of the story, but if it becomes obvious that questions won't be answered that the MC takes a different tact or Enna starts opening up or something. I think it would just be frustrating if it just becomes some kind of habit. I am really liking the two female characters so far, and I also like that while they are all down with sex they also aren't just immediately falling all over the MC or signing up to be in a harem or something. It would be great if there still is some of that slight distance, mystery, and tension to the relationship for a while (if not the majority of the story). It gives a kind hot dynamic, I think, and also gives a good opportunity for a nice build in the relationships. Super excited to see how things progress. I think when the next update is released I will play the new content then maybe take the time to start the game from the start again to see if there's stuff that I missed, which I normally would not be motivated to do for most erotic games.
Oracle
2023-08-02 08:04:13 +0000 UTCYou lose one point a day and you have five points. so you need to have sex every five days.
Theo
2023-07-19 08:16:38 +0000 UTCLiking the game. I played the mini game maybe a hundred times and got pretty good at it but I agree with some of the early comments and suggestions about it. I'll just add that having the items outlined in some way would have been a big help since I didn't even know what I could click. I just tried clicking every surface in the shop until I found most of them. With Moran, if there was a way to have sex with her beyond that first encounter, I never figured it out. It was hinted at but I could not find the game mechanic to do it. Blurry fade in when waking up could be a little faster. How often do you lose a life point? Is it one per day? Then you have to have sex every day or in a few days you die? And no way to get ahead or recover if you fall behind? Plus how many date point can you get in a day? One at most from what I've seen. So you need to work every day, get an excellent score (4 satisfied customers? or maybe 3?) to earn that date point, then have sex every day to stay alive. Am I misunderstanding some of the math? If Enna takes you on a mission do you lose a life point for that day? If so, you'll be dead after a few missions. Or maybe I was just confused about some of this.
MuteButtonHero
2023-07-19 05:52:29 +0000 UTCMy feed back for the minigame has already been stated by others so ill skip that part but I will say it gave me nostalgia of playing Recettear lol. Did you update the first chapter cuz it felt more fleshed out for some reason? If you did, a small comment on the new chapter release page would be super helpful to know if we should replay and give feedback on older chapters. Doesn't need much info just "Chapt X has also been updated." If you didn't, then perhaps I've gotten better at following the story than last time lol. As for Chapter 2, I really like were the story is going. Seeing Enna go from super compassionate to more distance gives hints that she may not have been as close to us as I originally thought but maybe she did want to be before we died (reinforce by her interrupted comment about not any corpse would do.) Also, the comment about Deaconess knowing more about us and "The Woman" could be a hint that we might have been closer to her than to Enna, which really peaks my interest. Moran is an interesting new character with nice hints about our past with her. Moran attacking so quickly is a bit strange but perhaps it has something to do with our past or maybe she really didn't want to hurt us but instead just scare us. Enna not giving warning is also a bit odd but perhaps she also had her reasons. Considering the questions answered about the blob people with Madame Dove (which was kinda funny and understandable) then I think the character choices will explained in the future. Seeing her walking around nearly naked is a bit odd especially since she's a demon and might not want to gather all the attention. Maybe she could use some form of Glamour (like in fantasy stories) to appear clothed to most people except those touched by The Morn. So far she's a fun character which I can't wait to learn and interact more with her. So far so good. Excited for what the future of this story holds.
thatguyhiding
2023-07-18 18:43:03 +0000 UTCOne thing I think would help with the minigame is if the timer stopped after you picked something so there was time to read the response. Now I have to spam click it away to get to the next customer.
RMZ
2023-07-12 22:02:27 +0000 UTCNew lighting is great! Also the beginning feels so much more coherent now. Great work!
RMZ
2023-07-12 19:40:18 +0000 UTCYeah this would help immensely. It's also harder if you're a slow reader because the timer keeps ticking.
RMZ
2023-07-12 19:39:28 +0000 UTCThe first time you play the shop minigame it would be nice if Enna gives a brief 2 line description of the items before throwing players into the minigame. For example the first time you talk to her to start the minigame, highlight the potions and have her say "these are the potions, they are useful for A, B, C" then highlight the shelves and have her say another similar 1-2 line dialogue. Repeat with all the items you can interact with at the shop. Not knowing where you can click and having to ask Enna for help until you figure it out makes the minigame a bit slow and tedious the first couple of times you play it. She should still be there to help the player but it would be nice if she could give a proper tutorial first.
A R
2023-07-12 14:42:22 +0000 UTC
