Ravenclaws Page 1
Added 2018-10-11 12:46:01 +0000 UTCI know I said I wasn't gonna do this page-by-page. The first story is called 'Cho Chang & The Magic Bean' btw.... make of that what you will. The story's gonna be great (with sexy results).
Anyway, I've got some things to say.
I don't think I like this art :( I really like the script, and I had these great ideas of how Ravenclaws would look and feel different from Good Girls, but I think this looks sloppy and I think you guys deserve better :(
I'm gonna finish this first story in this style - I've spent too long stressing over it already and I just want to share these fun stories with you guys already. After that, I'm probably gonna spend some time just doing some Ravenclaws illustrations so we can really figure out the best art style for this story :( Even the format made so much sense to me before, and now I'm not even sure why I chose to go with these vertically-oriented pages.
Well... that's all I wanted to talk about for now. I'm sorry if the artwork is disappointing. We'll keep working at this together until Ravenclaws is the fun and sexy story that I can see clearly in my imagination and that we can all be proud of.
Comments
Thanks - there are some things I'm really enjoying about this, like the high contrast comic art style and the feathering. I thought it'd look cool to be a little sketchy, but now I think I need this to be waaay more polished and clean. I'm glad you like it so far! That's really encouraging! I definitely think I can do better!
rainwater
2018-10-12 10:10:18 +0000 UTCI rather like the art, however if you're not satisfied with it, I certainly encourage you to experiment and find what you feel is the right style
T.S. Smelliot
2018-10-11 15:46:42 +0000 UTC
