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Title Change to HC: Handyman 3

Hey everyone! I’d love your input on something important.

A while back, I asked for your help choosing a title for Handyman Book 3—and after hearing your thoughts, I went with Bone Carving Brewer.

But now that the draft is nearly done... I’ve run into a bit of a problem.

Jack doesn’t actually do much bone carving in this book. What he does do is a lot of butchering. So, I’m seriously considering changing the title to The Brewing Butcher instead.

What do you think?
Does the new title sound stronger? Or should I stick with the original?

Let me know below—I really value your input!

Comments

I agree that the new title sounds like a drunken serial killer. You originally chose something he got from butchering rather than focusing on the entire field. The thing I think he’s gotten most from butchering at this point is better loot. Maybe focus on something like that?? Something like ‘Pillaging Brewer’ or ‘Brewing Salvager?’

Joi Wilson

New title is pretty good, and better than the first, but it makes me think a little of a serial killer brewing his anger to an explosion, :)

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