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Magical Girl Gunslinger: Chapter 02 - Anathema

Magical Girl Gunslinger: Chapter 02 - Anathema

Patch Notes
Minor dialogue changes.
Minor grammar changes.
Minor sentences added/deleted.

Changed final Emergency Alert notice. Old version was:

Reality Distortion: Moderate
Localized Dream Level: Restless

New version is:

Miasma Quality: 150
Miasma Density: Extreme


Comments

I think polearm is a better description than scythe.

mohd hisyam

Or possibly just Miasma Rating: 150? Miasma Score? Given that we also have a density, what is the quality measuring? Previously, distortion was hiq badly screwed up the local world is and dream level was ... How badly it affects people? From what has been said/shown about usurpation zones so far, I'd think the metrics that need to be tracked are 1) how MANY Anathema can cross over, 2) average level, and 3) size of the zone or scale of incursion. 20 anathema at level 20 invading a city block is less threatening than 20 anathema at lv 20 invading a small house. Which I guess does translate to quality (1), density (2), and volume (3). I guess I talked myself into liking density if another metric is added lol

Matt Cannon

I'm loving these edits and thrilled to see you active again! Only thought I have had so far (Hope you are looking for thoughts otherwise I'll keep it to myself) "Distortion: Moderate" to "Quality: 150." The term "Quality" as a standalone number is a bit unclear. Quality typically needs a reference frame or unit to be meaningful. For example, a ratio like 150/1000 (i.e., 15%) would be more informative. Personally I prefer Moderate >.<.

Scott Meyer


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